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| Rosie-bell 2008-06-28 ch 1,  | abuseAhahh that was good. -taps nose- Jolly good. :D |
| Angie 2008-04-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like it! |
| Bleeding Statue 2007-12-30 ch 1, | abuseskwak! I love this fanfic! Most people muck up a story in Edward's point of view, but this is really good! |
| xLilMissQuirkiex 2007-10-31 ch 1, | abuseoh! FIRST KISS! love them! -Exclamation Girl! |
| ibelieveinsnorkacks 2007-08-16 ch 1, | abuseVampire kisses are great...not that I would know, unfortunately ;) |
| moonstar.twinkle 2007-06-06 ch 1, | abuseu gave me an idea how edward would have felt when he kissed bella. ur story was funny but yet so edward. i liked it. oh yeah, by the way. i'm moonstar_twinkle!(also known as brenda) the one who wants to read ur other non twilight stories. u can email me at just reading ur story makes me wanna write twilight fanfic. i'll try writing some, but i don't think its gonna be any good. who knows, i might like it. but i'll also try to write something else besides twilight. i like it A LOT. but i feel like its starting to take over my every thoughts. that's why i'm forcing my self to stop reading or thinking about twilight. i know. tough. even though i find my self trying to stop thinking about twilight, it inspires me to write stuff, and make sense out of other non twilight related stuff. it's weird. n e ways. don't rush urself writing all of your stories, because the readers can feel the story being rushed. take ur time, and write at your own pace. but not too slow. keep up the good work, XD brenda |
| edward's blossom 2007-04-12 ch 1, | abuseCute. Well done. |
| difred 2007-04-12 ch 1, | abusethis could be interesting. please continue. |
| meme 2007-04-11 ch 1, anon. | abusewow that was awesome you should write the whole meadow scene~~!! |
| Jordan 2007-04-11 ch 1, anon. | abusehey, that was good, keep going |
| vamps4ever0917 2007-04-11 ch 1, | abuseshorter than I would have liked but i'm happy cuz i've been dying to read Edward's POV! thanx!! :D |
| melting gold 2007-04-11 ch 1, | abusei love this! this is the first time i think that someone took the time to write down his point of view...he's so sweet... you know i printed a photo of how edward is supposted to look like to me and went and said to each person in my class that if they see someone that resembles him then tell me so i can marry him... i know... pathetic but what are you gonna do about it? and why am i even telling you this?!? |
| lilvoice1 2007-04-10 ch 1, | abuseits not very long...you should make it longer because edward likes to over think things so i highly doubt he thought so little about kissing bella...have a look at the personal correspondence on the twilightlexicon...the have Stephenie's Meyer's explanation of what happen when edward kissed bella...that might help you make it longer...i highly suggest you make it longer...otherwise its okay... |
| forgotten twilight 2007-04-10 ch 1, | abuseyey for bad vampires! |
| Insanity's Partner 2007-04-10 ch 1, | abuseThat was good! You might want to ediut it and make it longer, and add some of the dialogue you'd forgotten... :) |