FINALLY a Jenny/Bustopher pairing! It's abundantly clear, at least in the video/dvd production, that Jenny has a thing for Bustopher NOT Skimble but so many pair them together. I liked it.

Aww...very nicely done, even though I'm not a fan of the pairing (Jenny/Skimble all the way!). You should definitely write more often!

Sidenote: I have a cat named Marmalade. :-D

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Very nice for your first fic! Cats was one of my first favorite musicals (ah, the fond memories!). I absolutely love this story. The tone is perfect and your characterization is spot on.

Ohh~ This was very in-character, and very affecting.. In just a few words you really got across how Jenny was feeling, especially the bewilderment and her determination/denial. "Nothing fit together anymore." I'm glad it ended like it did (...in my head I'm going to affix a totally unambiguous happily-ever-after right after ^^) E. Yay for first fic!!

Awe. That was so sweet... Is it just a one shot or shall it have more to it?

At first, I wasn't going to read it. Nothing against you, it just sounded sappy and cheesy in the summary - which I am a fan of. I just wasn't sure if I was in the right mood for it. But I am glad that I read it. It was very nice and the tone was excellent.
At the very start, however, there's a typo that had put me off greatly. "The s were Jellylorum’s job." Just fix that and it'll be super!