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Reviews for: Alms for the Poor
Kalquessa
2007-12-27 . chapter 1
Very cool, with the scary stalker girl. I like that of all the students crushing on Charlie, the one who cracks like this is the one whose behavior indicates she's also the most interested in actually learning from him (she was the one taking notes, wasn't she? And she even made sure to catch up her notes before getting up, not wanting to miss anything). Also liked Amita's cool head in the middle of scariness, it seems very her. And of course, Larry and Megan are love.
Kiki Cabou
2007-10-02 . chapter 1
Very cool. I liked the minimalist bits of dialogue in-between. I couldn't tell who was talking at first, but I eventually figured it out. Nicely done. :)
TasteinMen
2007-08-07 . chapter 1
Oh hell. Now that was...interesting. Amita handled that really well. And I am not surprised that they didn't tell Charlie. What the hell would they tell him?
CheekyBabe101
2007-07-23 . chapter 1
Not bad. I quite like it.
Once Upon A Twilight
2007-07-11 . chapter 1
AWH! that was so cute!

& so is charlie. ;] lololol -- fabulous job!
Sushi Chi
2007-07-09 . chapter 1
Wow. I liked that story. Very well written.
literaryfreak
2007-04-13 . chapter 1
O, I liked this. I like how you keep switching to different scenes, almost. And Amita is perfectly in-character. Well done:)
Jelsemium
2007-04-11 . chapter 1
Excellent story! It's always nice to see a good Amita story.

I like how you handle the characters. Even the stalker comes across as being sympathetic. (The fact that she didn't have a real gun helps.)

I'm glad that Amita chose not to press charges,too.

Looking forward to more stories from you!
mari4212
2007-04-10 . chapter 1
This is an amazing story, an interesting view on Charlie's math groupies and how blurred the line can become from admirer to stalker.

I love how you framed the story with Megan's conversations with Amita and Larry, it works so well. And Charlie so oblivious to what's happening in the human dynamics around him fits perfectly with his characterization in canon.

And I liked how you had Lynne holding Amita hostage with a water gun. It's a good twist on expectations, that while Lynne was becoming obsessed and going that far, she wasn't so lost as to actually try to harm Amita. It felt more realistic, and fit well within the storyline.
Me
2007-04-10 . chapter 1
Oh, that's good. I was wondering about that letter...
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