great story so far for something thats different to the original plot. i'm nearly finished reading memoirs of a geisha now, great timing

OMG. I love the plot, but I'm REALLY confused. Does Tenten LIKE Hiashi? It seems like it, but I don't think this fanfic is labeled NEJI AND TENTEN for nothing. And did Hiashi kiss her? Cuz if he did, that is like, SO WRONG. :P Anyway, Tenten is Tsunade's long lost daughter?!? WHOA. Shocking. :)) I hope she ends up with Neji, cuz I can't really imagine her with Hiashi and that sort of thing. :)) And BTW, Great job!

Nice.. Good job! :)

I am addicted to your story...it is absolutely wonderful!

WHAT THE HECK?! ITS NOT THAT I DON'T LIKE IT ITS JUST I DON'T REALLY GET WHAT THIS STORY IS ABOUT. THERE'S ANOTHER THING I DON'T GET WHY DOES NEJI DRINK HE NEVER DRINKS.HE ONLY DRINKS TEA AND PLUS TENTEN IS USUALLY LOUD AND WHAT NOT.SORRY TENTEN.WELL ANYWAYS I JUST DON'T GET WHAT ITS ABOUT. JA NE

great story, i love the plot, and the 'geisha' setting. as well as the characters, though Hiashi annoys me a bit. please update soon.

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But this is just PURE GENIUS and I'll just die just DIE I tell you if you dont update this masterpiece-in-progress You must think of something Your are a great author and your writing is insprirational! know that and let no1 tell you differently! Please dont waste your talent like other and continue to write and update :) Thanks your Loyal Reader MARIA aka RECEY

OMG what an unepected twist I LOVE IT This is one of my favorite story all my other favs haven't been updated in FOREVER or have been stupidly deleted by their authors.

I think this was a nice follow up to the last chapter. It answered a lot of questions. ^^ Poor Tsunade. But Hiashi is just evile! Loved this chapter! (loved the cliffie too!)

I loved this chapter! To be honest I'm a little confused. Did Neji just make out with Tenten in a dark hallway? Or did he do something more? I also totally loved your description of the maiko ceremony. :) It was awesome!

that is twisted. someone who is pretty much old enough to be her father and who was meant to marry her mother...how the heck can tenten fall for his charms? lol. i thought his old-age wrinkles should've been a turn off ^^

update asap, and i hope you get over your writer's block =D

whoa!! did not expect that ending. that was totally a suprise. i loved it though. this story is so awesome and well written. youre doing a wonderful job. i was so happy to see an update! hehe

This story i amazing! The way you put in the real ways of a geisha along with twists and turns of the plot is great. The story is well written and has a good plotline. It is much better than mine. Also the vocabulary is superb.

What a wonderful and exciting story!! Please, let it end well! It's so hard to find a geisha story that really ends well (before the geisha is very old like in Memoirs I mean). And it's a Tenten/Neji story, too, so it would make for a perfect romantic story worth publishing. Keep writing and updating,

your avid reader!