hi there! ^^
wow, you wrote this 5 years ago? it is really good... i wish i could write that well haha. i'll review for all the chapters so far in this one, ok? alright!
first off, i love the idea of kai and max being brothers! at first, it never even occured to me, just because they're so different. and i like the person who so happens to be their common link: ria! ^_^ she's awesome, and so hyper like max. yet smart like kai. it's a scary combo if one thinks about it too much. heh *nervous laugh*
i love when OCs just bring out a new side to a character you're not used to seeing it on, especially with kai :D very nicely done there. (i.e. the tickle match)
don't worry, i won't criticize your writing style here (i hate doing that anyway, and if it comes out somehow O.o i apologize) besides, i like it ^^ more dialogue than all the other stuff can be refreshing. but i do have a question though: are you just reposting it exactly as it was when you first put it on here? just curious. :)
i almost forgot... loved the rabid fangirl part... good thing he got out ok right? ;) kai and his sister have a family now *sniff* how sweet! :D good job keeping max and tyson in character. it's great that emily was involved as a nice character ^_^ good job, you got me to laugh at seth when he lost... it was an awesome moment lol.
also, love the songs mentioned... aly and aj's "walking on sunshine" and "twinkle twinkle little star" maybe i liked them because i actually knew them :O
where else can i boost your ego... lolz. i kinda think it would be cute if she was with johnny, if not with rei. O.o i don't know which one to like more... XO it's kinda cute how she's jealous of mariah haha. O:)
ah yes, nearly forgot this one too... i like that you switch between the POV's. it's really nice to get the different perspectives sometimes ^^;
i think that's about it, sorry for the short review ;D i can't wait to see an update on this already posted story! XD
chocolatexloverx16
p.s. i hope i gave you some of that ever needed love you were looking for. :D after all, this is my longest review... lol this would be like 4-5 separate reviews. ;) keep up your amazing work!

I'm reading it! I'm surprised how little reviews u hav for such an awesome story!

OMG! poor kai xD tickle war neh? lol! SO FUNNY!

I like this story! It's very interesting but the OC bothers me a bit. I really like her but for some strange reason I kinda hate her. T.T UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

I can't beleive this only has one review, this is the story that first got me hooked on Beyblade fanfiction over a year ago. Whats wrong with people these days anyway?

lol, I hope you update again soon. I missed this story, so I can't wait to read it :)

--Keira Clark

This looks like it's going to be good! And I don't usually like OCs, but yours seems different and interesting, well done!