It’s great to see a good old classic Charmed fic! Not to mention a fic which feels like an episode itself when the series was at its best, filled with a bit of humor, romance, tragedy, happy ending, but most importantly, a strong plot. So excellent job!

Damn you Piper! DAMN YOU! Why would she say no? Well i know why just uhhh! That evil witch!

Ahhhhh! Oh my god, oh my god, oh my freaking god! This is sooooo awesome. I'm so giddy right now. I can't believe that Leo would do that. He's so freaking smart. Ahhh!

Awe, poor Leo. It's okay! It's all going to be okay!

Very awesome chapter! : )

Damn it! I knew it was Dan. I was hoping it wasn't but, damn! Poor Leo. I feel so bad for him. : (

Who the hell is this 'boy'? Oh and if it's 2007 is Chris born in the not messed up world and isn't Leo human? Well i get how Leo is a whitelighter he has to be for the story, but uh Chris? Yay, nay?

He IS being watched. God, how creepy are demons? They're like freaking stalkers.

Haha "That used to happen to me in my partying days" Oh Phoebe! How i love you. He he, awesome!

Oh my god! Piper has no clue who he is, does she? Ahhh! I gotta read the next chapter. I'm super giddy right now. : )

I love the plot line and you have done a very good job on this so far. : ) But i hope Leo will fix it 'cause as much as i like Prue i loooooove Paige!

Good!

great story :D

very nice endng, Really enjoyed the story. good writing, keep it up.

lol short and sweet, Tarquin had a pretty short ending didnt he, brilliant story! Hope you write many more fantastic stories such as this, its been nice bugging you with reviews! x