That was really good. I liked it a lot. Love the mythology twists in it! ^^

And Kai is my favorite! XD

Can there please be a sequel? Please? Your story is so awesome! I want to see Kai and Kikile back together!

hi there! ^^
yet again, i am amazed by your stories :D the originality is very striking in this story, and i'm very glad to have been able to read it ^_^ great job! :D
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p.s. it would be cool if you did a sequel to this... and the only place i've found those fandubs is on youtube XD other than that, the series is a very very good hider... O.o

it is so beautiful and a change from everything i have read in myth.

VERY GOOD CHAPTER! i cant wait for the next one! update soon please! ^_^

wow you made up a whole new language! cool!

AWSOME story cant wait to read more!

Ok,... not good... we can only be sure Kai will be giving Kikile a rough time..

It's been a few days since I last went here... hehe.. it's a nice start to a story,..

I'm going to be honest. I read the first two chapters of your story because you summary is very appealing. However, I got completely turned off by your character. She's "gorgeouly exotic," can beat all of the bladebreakers without a sweat and she is immediately introduce as being Kai's rival.

No matter how good your plot is, and no matter how good your writting is, a Mary-Sue character completely ruins the story. suggest you look over you character and create some flaws and but them in as you introduce her.

You have an excellent writing style and a good idea for a story, I simply suggest reviewing you character.

Update son. ^.^
This story is really good so far. I like the whole plot and the way you change point of views to give us a better picture of the situations. Very good. It's a very well written story as well so far too.
Keep up the good work!

Right. I'm already loving this one.
*continues reading*

hehehee...
when i read this story... i went into a sudden fit of giggles!
hehehe...
hahaahah

i love it! please please please please please please please
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