 Team-Edward-Sexe 2009-10-27 . chapter 7I don't get it.. what was edwards revenge? Let me know x thanks |
 pupp63 2009-02-08 . chapter 6thats a really good story but somethings wrong for chapter 10 it wont show any more past after he says good morning. like thats the end of the story... |
 SopranoandBass 2008-12-08 . chapter 7Cute, lovely! |
 rockenweirdo 2008-12-06 . chapter 7LOL! Nice! |
 TheRandomPerson 2008-10-17 . chapter 4 Ya know, what Jazzy and Alice are doing is kinda like rape or somethin'... |
 Jessie 2008-08-17 . chapter 7 Ha ha ha! I just love the ending- pure hilarity! Poor Bella- poor Edward. I love Jasper Hale! |
 wow 2008-07-21 . chapter 7 . |
 OECD 2008-07-10 . chapter 7WOW I WOULD SO KILL THEM! IF I WERE EDWARD I WOULD'VE BURNT ALL OF ALICES CLOTHES AND JASPERS FAVORITE BOOK LOL BUT THIS WAS WAY BETTER! |
 ShaJuLu 2008-06-27 . chapter 1xDD Poor Bella when she felt his manhood by accident as they wre lying in bed. LOL. |
 edwardspet 2008-06-19 . chapter 7Um wow that ending was interesting. |
 edwardspet 2008-06-19 . chapter 4Oh how sad, not, I love this story its great. |
 edwardspet 2008-06-19 . chapter 3Oh this story is so great. |
 edwardspet 2008-06-19 . chapter 2OMG |
 edwardspet 2008-06-19 . chapter 1HaHa I left a review now you have nothing on me. |
 Mandy 2008-05-15 . chapter 7 that was the crappiest ending ever. seriously. all that crying and ** for nothing?? that is unrealistic, even on bellas part because who cries about getting laid?? seriously? |