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| Omnicat 2008-06-13 ch 1,  | abuseGuh. Seriously... guh. That was... that was... That stole all the words with any semblance of meaning right from my mind. I don't think anything I could say about this would do it justice. I'm staring at the screen all boggly-eyed, so impressed? affected? I am. O_O The only thing I can say is that the disorienting effect your writing had in places was very effective, and that your descriptions of Jet - especially "that blank, uneven stare" - conjured up such crystal clear images. This little gem makes the actual episodes look like unpolished coal in comparison. GUH. |
| avatarlove 2007-12-23 ch 1, | abuseWhat an amazing story! You are such a great writer. You are really detailed and descriptive in your writing. Hey, could you so me a favor? Go to my site, and check out my writing. Would you mid rating it and telling me how it is so far? Also, is anything wrong with it? Your comments would mean a lot considering you are such a talented writer yourself. Thanks ;) -Lauren (aka: avatarlove) |
| Musiclover953 2007-12-23 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely brilliant. You're an awesome writer! It was so good, but I was so sad -tears- so sad! Why can't he come back? Why can't he live again? It sucks man! XD |
| Spleefmistress 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abuseBeautifully written. |
| Winter Ashby 2007-04-13 ch 1, | abuseThat was really interesting. It was such a different kind of world, and you described it perfectly. Your language has gotten better and I see that you really understand Jet's character. I could totally hear him saying all those things in my head. And Katara was great too. I got a little confused right at the end, with the water. But I figured it out (I think). She took the oasis water from inside Jet and healed Aang. How sad! Kuddos points for the unbeleivable angst. I loved it. It was a great challange fic. I look foward to reading more avatar fics from you. ;) -Ash |
| libowiekitty 2007-04-11 ch 1, | abuseOH MY GOSH, I LOVE THIS STORY! What a cool concept, instant faves. |