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M
2009-02-01 . chapter 5
More pleazz! I love it and its really cute. More!
gkjgjkdfj
2008-10-29 . chapter 5
MORE!11
G{O
2008-10-29 . chapter 3
OMG THAT IS SO CUTE!
xKatieBearx
2008-03-05 . chapter 1
OMG. i can't believe i only just found this. OMG.
... OMG. cuteness!
that was like... can't even quote anything, that was so cute :P
sparkly stickers. ah yeah. they're good ;)
you have so got to update soon, this is such -SQUEE- worthy ;)
ahaha. jack's 'baggie' and kate and sawyer's cuteness XD
xox Katie
xCharlie-Groupiex
2007-08-18 . chapter 5
aww! please update soon! Ben is such a freaky little boy! but he is hilarious!
Katie
2007-08-12 . chapter 5
Oh! I LOVE this fic!! It is SO, SO cute!! I loved the freckles bit, trying to count them... i had no other option but to start squealing, my mum thought i was mad =P
SKATE forever!
Trillian Astra
2007-07-21 . chapter 5
aww, evil plans! Cool!

update soon.
TrueBlondie
2007-07-08 . chapter 5
This story brings back old memories of being bossy and playing with clay-dough.Anyways, great story love the Sawyer/Kate/Jack/Juliet action.
Imzadi
2007-07-08 . chapter 5
I really don't think someone that young would be using the word "evil," but Ben is a strange kid. I like the Jack/Kate/Sawyer/Juliet quadrangle. I'd like to see Bernard ask Rose out--but it shouldn't take him 20 years!
hobbits on the island
2007-07-06 . chapter 5
Wow, these kids are already getting in love triangles and making evil plans... when i was in preschool i just remember pouring paint all over myself. And eating playdough.
hobbits on the island
2007-07-06 . chapter 2
"Claire suddenly looked sad and Shannon felt a bit bad, but she quickly forgot about it when she spotted a sparkly sticker on the floor." -Baha! That's awesome. Stickers make everything better.
bonboni
2007-07-06 . chapter 5
juliet and ben are here, yay!

“Ok” Claire said, carefully putting Aaron inside the crib then kissing his forehead, Rose smiled at the gesture. - AWW!

“Please Rose, we’ve worked here together for nearly 20 years… I think you can call me Bernard”
“Ok Bernard” Rose blushed slightly. - hehehehehehehe!

“Im Juliet” She said again when she reached him.
“I know” Jack smiled “Im Jack” - oh-oh. jacket. not good. uh-uh. not good at all. :P

“What do you do around here?” Ben asked him.
“I sit” Locke replied vacantly “And think about things”
“Do you make plans?” Ben asked.
“What sort of plans?” Locke asked.
“Evil plans” He answered with a smile.
“No I am not an evil boy” Locke replied.
“Oh” Ben said simply and walked off, he was going to find Juliet, she liked making plans with him. - LOL! i'm sure that they both like plans! :D

anyways, i liked that chapter as you can see. snack time? that should be fun! interesting to see who eats what... lol! update soon, please!
bonboni
~X~
The Other
2007-07-05 . chapter 5
lol..how cute. Jack is so nice, it's so adorable. Ben and Locke are a bit creepy. Please update REALLY soon please
SassyLostie
2007-07-05 . chapter 5
YAY! Juliet’s here! And Jacket friendship! And Ben too! Lol Yeah, I liked this chapter, as you can tell! :)

“Why aren’t you having your nap James?” She asked him.
“Cause I don’t wanna” He replied.
“Im afraid you have to” Rose chuckled slightly “That’s the rules”
“I don’t like rules” Sawyer said “I aint sleepy” – HA! That was great,and so Sawyer. Even as a little kid, he’sbreaking the rules. ‘I don’t liekrules.’ Way to be blunt, and such a kiddish thign to say. Nice job, Emily! I have this little image of a younegr version of Sawyer, sitting on the ground with his arms folded over his chest, and a scowl on his face. Lol!

This was my other fave part,andsurprisingly,it had nothing to do with Sawyer! Hehe -

“Hello” Ben replied “My name is Benjamin Linus”
“Im John Locke” John replied.
“What do you do around here?” Ben asked him.
“I sit” Locke replied vacantly “And think about things”
“Do you make plans?” Ben asked.
“What sort of plans?” Locke asked.
“Evil plans” He answered with a smile. – Sorry for quoting so much, but that was really cute and funny to read. Ben’s already makin gevil plans, and Locke just sits and stares. Much like he often did at the beginning of the show after the crash. :D

You are doing so well with this and it’s fun to read every time there’s a new chap up. The cuteness is amazing! Good chap, Emily! Btw, why are you suspended on YouTube?
xCharlie-Groupiex
2007-07-02 . chapter 4
AW! THAT WAS HILARIOUS AND SO SWEET! 'You taste like strawberries' lol

'you're not meant to eat me!' lol poor jack!!

'you gotta catch me first!'


wow! keep up the good work!
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