| Reviews for Konoha Hearts |
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starhuda 6/19/10 . chapter 21 This is a really great chapter.I love it! |
avonda1030hotmail.com 5/27/09 . chapter 22 hi this is avonda alleyne.i read your fanfic (KONOHA HEARTS),the fanfic is great,sorry not too much fighting scences, i also love the relationship with kaede and sasuke,sorry if kaede gotten preganant before sasuke left,and he found out he had will also great if afterwards seguel to konoha,orochimaru found out sasuke left him and double crossed him,using him as the next vessel,he wanted revenged against him and his family,kaede and his son.,what do you think? |
I3YourStory 2/7/09 . chapter 6 oh grr... i h8 dat sasuke... grr... it makes me pissy... :O truth b told, i never liked sasuke, but this story makes me so... grr... sasuke will pay *grins evilly, takes out a kunai, and sneaks out* sasuke will pay 4 what he did 2 kaede! o, btw, I LOVE YOUR STORY! ITS SO AMAZINGLY AWESOME! U GOT ME HOOKED! KEEP WRITING! |
avonda1030hotmail.com 1/23/09 . chapter 1 hi this is avonda alleyne:I read your fanfic,its a great fanfic,but its too short and shall have more is the you intrested in doing another fanfic of kaede& sasuke & an idea of an fanfic:To keep her mind off sasuke,kaede wanted to become stronger,kaede join the Anbu,as a trainee,kaede pass as she accepted to a be an anbu black ops kakashi/captain yatamo team 7(included to the rain uncovered s-rank mission is to assassinate the rogue ninja with his oraganation of rogue villages,kaede mission with shikamaru is to infiltrate their hideout,and assassinate the members and leader,protect the kazge of the rain found out a bounty is out for his head,also he found out kaede is to assassiante,he put out a bounty on kaede's head, sasuke found out,he went to rain country,to protect 8,team me,what do you think?. |
avonda1030hotmail.com 1/3/09 . chapter 1 hi my name is avonda-alleyne.I read your fanfic,its a great fanfic,with alot of action .finally sasuke is paired up with someone else than sakura and you intrested in a fanfic idea if you are intrested,it named second Chance,shippuden been 3 years after sasuke kill his brother itachi,sasuke wondered if he make the decision to leave konoha and kaede,it was coming up to her 18th found out a rogue shinobi and gang of assassins,are after to attack small villages,captured head leader of rogue assassins is kaede long lost uncle,he is after kaede,to captured her and brainwashed her to fight against her and team hawk appeared to save ,sai,sakura,neji ,miki,ino,naruto and the rest of the gang went to the villages to help them,their fall into the assasins trap,also kaede,what do you think? email and tell me. |
avonda1030hotmail.com 12/31/08 . chapter 8 Hi my name is avonda alleyne.I read your fanfic and i will like to say the fanfic is great with alot of romance and is my favorite bad up the good writing and continued more great sasuke/kaede shall submitted this fanfic to the producers of the show in san ,to make it a shippuden arc tv ntinued writing more fanfics,cause i enjoy reading your new year. |
avonda1030hotmail.com 12/26/08 . chapter 15 Hi my name is avonda alleyne.I read your fanfic,first let me say,its a great fanfic and i give it 7 's a fanfic idea if you are intrested,fanfic idea named;shippuden arc named;Second chance,3 years later,everyone is 15 years,sasuke still training with orochimaru, 3 years nearly up for him to give up his body to gotten sick and the treatment that kabuto have been rejecting his body, orochimaru wanted another medical ninja to help him and new only person,lady tusande student kaede is the only one,can send sasuke to kidnapped kaede,its been 3 years kaede haven't seen him,still he have feelings for her,and can he changed her mind to healed the snake,with the haterd she have towards him?,what do you think?,email and tell me. |
PykaL 12/25/08 . chapter 24Wow! Thank you so much for this! It's a very nice fic, well done! I really liked Kaede it was a great OC. once again great job! |
2lazy2comeupwith1 12/21/08 . chapter 1THIS STORY IS AMaZING! ITS SO WELL-WRITTEN AND THE CHARACTERS ARE SO THEMSELVES ND NOT OOC LIKE MOST STORIES! lol i loved it and spent all of yesterday finishing reading it! |
avonda1030hotmail.com 12/15/08 . chapter 24 Hi this is Avonda Alleyne.I read your fanfic,its a great fanfic,I think you shall a sequel,with this great having someone paired up with sasuke,than sakura or karin,i hate fanfic still missing,why you didn't write in the fanfic,the plot line,sasuke kill orochimaru,and his brother,also kabuto absorbed orochimaru remains while taking over him,wanted revenged on sasuke and naruto,danzou and wanted revnged on the village,but still its a great fanfic,keep up the goodwriting and hope soon it will be a sequel,how neji and miki met,that will be a great fanfic. |
raven lysha tate 3/12/08 . chapter 24omfg i luved this! this one and the first one of course! u kept me going back and forth of pro sasukeXkadae or anti..i couldn't make up my mind! but i luv the ending. very cool *thumbs up rock lee style* luved it |
ibananas 11/17/07 . chapter 7This story is so dramatic!Sasuke and Kaede's relationship is so sweet!I listened to the Potential Breakup Song when i read the chapters with Sasuke and Kaede!X3 |
obligatoryUsername 10/3/07 . chapter 22Wow, taht was like, awesome. Could you please read The Michi Trio: The Journey Begins, by alex the great123? It's really good. And if you are, don't mention me telling you please? |
Valinor's Twilight 9/6/07 . chapter 24I enjoyed it very much. |
KinKitsune01 9/1/07 . chapter 24You can bet I'll be looking out for a sequel from you! ;) The prologue rocked, and this story has just been the best ever, including its' prequel aswell. My favourite SasuOC fic, ever! Thanks for the great story and I'll check out Is Forever Enough when I have free time. :D |