It's a nice prologue. But it needs the second chapter! *HINTHINTHINT* If the Xiaolin warriors REALLY need an appearence, then do it, but only if it's benefic to the plot, otherwise it will end up unnecessary.

Oh, an I think I noticed a lil' grammar mistake at: "And how could she even attempt to blackmail him with what she was supposed to do-love him and except him as her son!" There-"except him as her son". Instead "except", it should have been "accept". Yeah, I know they sound the same, but there are actually two whole different meanings.

Okay, I got a bit carried away, but sorry in advance for the long review and please continue the story. It's good by far.