oh this is such a great story i think i am going to cry

That was beautiful

I adored it! So simple and had an unexpected ending!

I thought Kagome wasn't coming back. You're really good. You should write a sequel

that was pretty to say the least. it was a good re-write! definitely good.

Wow... Cool. Really... Wonderous language use... You must be one of the best writers out here! Wow... Seriously... Good job! =)

sheesh. you sure know how to get a person excited. during the whole story i kept saying aww... and i thought i was going to cry. but man that was an amazing ending.

O I wuv it!

that is such a cute one shot :) I'm speachless on how good it was.
I'm definitly adding to my favorites
awesome writing. It takes a true authour to be able to pull of the ending like you did.

Eep!

*smiles and giggles*

Unexpected, last-minute fluff! It made me giddy. I actually squeaked out loud . . .

Aw

I was like... near tears through it all and then at the end I was all "yay!" :-)

Yeah

:-)

o wow. i was like, on the verge of tears and then...T.T

beautiful. this story has a wonderful, unexpected ending. truely beautiful.

absolutely adored it

Aww that was so cute. I loved it.