I love your story, but it is going to give me nightmares tonight.

Oh my god. I am never ever gonna laugh at the Box Ghost ever again. That was creepy.

And woah! Hey! I know who the detectives are gonna be! Cleanliness breach in shoulder section Alpha!

you sure did a number on my brain.

Never before this fic would i have feared the box ghost.

i'm just gonna go read something to keep the nightmares away now... and be very nice to any cardboard boxes i happen to come across.

These are really good and really addictive but I’m going to be having nightmares for the rest of the week. I didn’t know the Box Ghost could be anything close to creepy, let alone scary-your-pants-off freaky.

If you want a good eighties ghost definatly go with jhonny and kitty. Ember is definatly a ninties girl. Oddly enough I can see youngblood in the early fifties. I really have no clue for desire. Oh nope I take that back technus would be absolutly perfect for the eighties! Jhonny and kitty I can better see fitting in the sixties anyway. So that's my thoughts on things. Keep writting I love it.

the detectives are the %!#ing guys in !%# white

omg!

OH JESUS.

This seriously gave me the chills. I was left toward the end biting my nails and not realizing it. Who knew Skulker could be so...deadly?

Awesome job Cori!

This was better. Intriguing, but disturbing at the same time.

Disgusting. Morbid. Sordid. Disturbing. What the hell is this? Well written, but when you said R and gore, I didn't think it would be as descriptive as this.

Good hook for the story.

God, I hate how some of the wimpiest ghosts can be some of the scariest (i.e. The Box Ghost). You do a really good job of making this story, like, extra-scary, even with wimpy ghosts.

Will we be seeing Maddie, Jack, and Vlad any time soon? Maybe the next ghost could even be Point-Dexter! But I'd actually prefer the next ghost to be Ember. Like, maybe she goes after her ex-lover because he dumped her (for whatever reason).

I think the two detectives become the Guys in White.

Please, please, PLEASE update this story soon and don't ever stop writing! :)

meranie-chan

Wow... these stories are scary, but they fit the ghosts well. Maybe you can do Johnny and Kitty. Other good ghosts are Undergrowth, Vlad in the mid 80's onward, Pointdexter, and so on.

Wow- I just realized, since Pointdexter is from the 50's, you might not be able to include him (His origin story requires Casper High being around).

Let me guess: The detectives are going to become the main two Guys In White?

That is so incredibly disturbing... I think I mind rejects the fact that the box ghost could achieve that simply because I see him as so useless (and a child cartoon show gag character) but it does make sense for him to fall into that. Skulker was easier to see killing people but boxy there hit that corner of my mind that went blank and got the shivers. You incorporate Amity of the past well with it's future. And I'm going to hazard a guess that those detectives... might be the guys in white one day... but thats not a big guess.

I would have never thought that the box ghost would have the guts to kill someone...or that skulker would eat two people. He's more of a I-want-your-head-as-a-trophy kind of guy.

(-twitch-) That's supposed to say Box Ghost, not Boc Ghost. Dangit!