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Katraa
2007-04-13 . chapter 1
...im asking myself WHY i didn't see this ..
I BLAME SOCIETY.
seriously, i didn't even see this until now.
wow, im a retard ... : D

that was amazing and so swet.
riku was kawaii in it.
poor sora.
sex gets between everything.
oh sweet ... sardine ;)
loved it.
ChibiFrubaGirl
2007-04-12 . chapter 1
AW... Sweet! ^_^ At first it seemed really angsty, like it would end with one of them either dying or leaving the other.
...
But then there was a sweet ending!
I really enjoyed this. But I think it should have been written in second or first POV. It'd be less confusing that way. Like at the beginning it was hard to tell which "he" or "him" was Sora and which was Riku.
But I figured it out as the story went on so it's okay I guess!
This was very good!
*bliss*
FlurryDivider
2007-04-12 . chapter 1
*smiles* I liked it.
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