This was the funniest thing ever, you really got across how it is always peyton for lucas and that he is always trying convince himself otherwise. and you managed to do it in a funny way!! lol loved it :D

LOL

ahahah that made me crack up! he loves brooke yes but it's always been peyton he may be in love with brooke but i don't think it ever even compared to what he has always felt for peyton and you showed that!! great job!!

:D I liked it. It was funny. Good job.
-Annie.

LMAO at the image of Peyton and Lucas sitting brooding over Jake - good idea, he so should have been gay, lol!

I liked this: it was quite and showed Lucas' feelings. I only really ever tend to write about Peyton.

hahaha that was funny :P Lucas beeing gay haha. great work. Easy written and still you captured some LP love, very nice.

i love this! it just shows how much Luke goes weak with Peyt!

LOL!

I have no idea if that was suppose to be funny.. but it made me laugh. Damn it. Poor Luke.

that was funny.

i liked it!! cute story!! hope to read more from you soon!

I really liked this. The thoughts going through Lucas' head were written perfectly.

Aww, yay you wrote a new, fresh fic! Can you tell I'm a fan? lol. Anyways, this is great so far; although I don't know if this is a one-shot or not. But I do hope you continue with this one. It's very good so far!

i really enjoyed that. it was very funny. i think you could even do another chapter from peyton's side

i luv this one-shot! i loved the battle of thoughts in lucas' head :D...seems likely for him to be thinkin those thoughts neway...keep the fics coming xoxo
ps- whts going on with fanfictionz doc uploader?? "damn it" evrytime i try uploadin ntn comes. help. please.

WOW...I can believe that these were the thoughts in Lucas's head during that road trip. Great job...!