Update!

very good. hilariously ooc. cant wait for the rest!

ha! this is HILARIOUS. (a little random) but awesome

so funny and OOC and random lol

loved it

can't wait for Jimena and Collin :D

-AceCade

Poor Serena!

lol. that last line was hysterical!

-AceCade

write more. it's hilarious!

OMGSH! this is SO FUNNY! please update! i wanna see what happens with CATTY! LOL! vanessaXmichael... priceless..priceless...

hahahahah! that was great! i can't wait for the next ones!

THIS IS AMAZING I TELL YOU AMAZING! keep on keepin on!

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This only makes me love Vanessa more, when she's in her "Dominatrix" character. And loving Vanessa can sometimes be hard.

Batsu-chan

It like a car crash! I just cant look away!

To tell you the truth: The first chapter was reasonable. This chapter was simply ridiculous. I dont see Vanessa acting so phycotic...but then agian, its hilarious!

Uru

Hopefully, the pharmicist gets paid enough to tolerate this crap that happens in Rite-Aid... Poor, poor lady...

But, LOL! Vanessa being the "man" in the relationship... Man, that cracked me up! Update please!

I feel bad for that pharmacist. Man.

Good job!

Batsu-chan

OH SNAP! serenas going to be tied to a surfboard and left in the middle of the ocean with her unborn child.

my favorite part had to be "It was like an intense Soap Opera…Only without the intensity." lol thats amazing.

MOST IMPORTANTLY: THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR ONE (woman/girl) ATTEMPT AT REVIVING THE DOTM SECTION!

this is great so far it has realy good deacription and how do you post a story i got 1 wrote but i don't know how to post it on fan fic can you wrte me back and tell me how plz