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CelticReaper
2009-11-23 . chapter 13
bwahahahahahahahah XD

more! ^_^
The Wandering Soul of 1014
2009-11-10 . chapter 2
-Could you send me the links to a few of these fics please?
xfighter4
2009-10-17 . chapter 13
This collection tops the Potter one-shots! Pls update soon!
Yo
2009-10-12 . chapter 13
I liked the thread this last chapter continued, and enjoyed the general plot, but I thought making Naruto randomly grab Anko's chest throughout the piece was too out of character and detracted from the humor of the rest of the piece.
Pre-time skip, he constantly reacts so negatively and so loudly to perverted actions of others it just didn't seem to fit. Even his "Sexy Jutsu" was used to take advantage or to mock others perverted behavior rather than to exhibit any of his own.

Other than that, I have really enjoyed this and several of your other pieces, so please keep up the good work.
gone119
2009-10-08 . chapter 13
Great story!
MasterBrattan
2009-09-29 . chapter 13
that was fairly nice of orochimaru, thinking of sasuke's teammates
MasterBrattan
2009-09-29 . chapter 10
23 more lee's; that is plain evil
hentai18ancilla
2009-09-15 . chapter 13
This, it nearly tops the Potter one-shots except for that short series with Kei what's his face and the incipient chapters [I really like this sub-plot]everything else did not have much lucre. Can't wait to see what Anko does next with Naruto or what she does as a sensei or what happens to Kakashi with the 30 students in cohesive groups with a touch of sadism.
Zero-Vision
2009-09-15 . chapter 6
Neji has embraced youth...hehe
Bobboky
2009-09-03 . chapter 13
very very nice and funny
jade
2009-09-02 . chapter 13
This new chapter just made me laugh clear through it. You have got to write this into a story- it's just too good not for you or someone to try.

You especially have to write about what exactly happened in Wave with Kakashi and his class of "students" that caused him to snap and decide to get them ALL in the chunin exams! All the possibilities and having Naruto's team following to make sure that things went so good were just making me laugh.

I had an image of Kakashi's class terrorizing the enemies with all their wonderful mischief of pranks during the invasion. Maybe, some of them got a little injured, but knowing that Kakashi is being payed back with Karma is somehow so fitting.

This is one of my favorite chapters you've written and I keep coming back in the hopes that you'll have done a story on this. The hint that the whole team may be getting summoning scrolls was a nice touch at the end as well as the explosive letter Anko sent in reply. Makes me wonder what types of summons they each might get. Dragons for naruto or will they be the types that actually fit their personalities?
iamnuff
2009-09-01 . chapter 8
the deal with ikibi's tea-set. scary as all hell.
Glennis
2009-08-28 . chapter 13
"Naruto muttered, firmly pressed against Anko's chest with a happy smile.

Sakura sighed. "Naruto, must you spend all your time plastered to Sensei's chest?"

"Yes, yes I must. I'll stop when they pry my cold dead fingers off em!" Naruto growled."

Oh man if only some one would actually turn this into a full length fic...
Glennis
2009-08-28 . chapter 8
*giggles* (manly perverted giggles mind you)
I actually giggled out loud and got a lot of weird looks for it... Thanks
theNewDesire
2009-08-10 . chapter 13
I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! please, please, please update on this idea. I nearly fell out of my chair laughing! XD
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