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danceswpenguins9
2008-03-27 . chapter 1
This is a really interesting idea.
I'll keep reading! Yay!
Merrymow
2007-11-24 . chapter 14
I was wondering when you're going to update?
La Nanita
2007-09-14 . chapter 14
Ah--at last, a new chapter! Hmm...your AN sounds like it was once Shakespeare??

Great chapter, interesting as ever, always leaving the reader wanting more (even if they have to wait a month). Tom's ignoring Natalie? I think Tom still cares, even if Voldemort doesn't...I'll faithfully wait for the next chapter to find out :)
EmmaRiddleDaughteroftheDark
2007-09-14 . chapter 14
Darren is too vulnerable and sweet. Something's gotta be wrong with him. And she's gonna have everything blow up in her face. Tom is probably ** and jealous. Not a good combo.
Willa1317
2007-09-14 . chapter 14
NO NO NO~! No. this can''t happen! Harry has t o do ...something! now that he's Tom's only livng.. er relative? Any way, he cant give up! never!
animeangel088
2007-07-18 . chapter 13
good fic!
EmmaRiddleDaughteroftheDark
2007-07-17 . chapter 13
Ah, to be back home after camp.

Great chapter, even if it was off topic. I'm sure it'll get there. Writer's Block usually doesn't last long for you.

The last chapter was fantastic. You know how much I adore the quote about Love.

~Emma
Tom Felton is SO HOTT
2007-06-19 . chapter 12
WOPW!! wake up call!Totaly shocked me!:)
La Nanita
2007-06-19 . chapter 12
Okay, so as I was reading I was like, there's no way this can be happening. Thank God it was just a dream. That was an awful long wait for an awfully small plot-development...
La Nanita
2007-05-29 . chapter 11
Sweet! New Chapter! You're so lucky you're out of school, I have two weeks left.

It feels a lil fast-paced for me, but maybe we just have different styles. For instance, I would have elaborated on scences like Ollie's internal monologue, and Natalie's confiding in Professor Potter.

BTW: what were you going for with Harry's characterization? First I got a younger, rebellious vibe (unorganized, cluttered office) but then he ages 20 years in 10 seconds (getting a headache and saying things like "My dear" and "I'm afraid..."

All in all, great chappie, and I look forward to more frequent updates now that you're out of the dungeons...I mean school.

Much Luv,

La Nanita
EmmaRiddleDaughteroftheDark
2007-05-28 . chapter 11
So, you think you can just 'get me', eh?
How would you like it if I got you whenever I had the chance.
Many, many, many, many hidden phrases. All over the place.
I am still, brilliant, however.
Lord it over me, you shall not. And finally:
You little **. (not really, for those who don't know me)

Take that.

Great chapter. Wish there was more. *hinthint* But summer is at 2:18 tomorrow.
@Wonder@
2007-05-12 . chapter 1
I've been searching for really good stories and I found this: it's WONDERFUL! I read the whole story in one day because I liked it so much. Please keep writing because I can't wait for the next chapter (and, of course, the rest of the story :D).
Thank you for writing this story and sorry for having written a long review (well, not that long...).
Willa1317
2007-05-09 . chapter 10
oyah!! harry potter to the rescue!! i love natalie, she's such a strong character.
Tom Felton is SO HOTT
2007-05-08 . chapter 10
Good definetly tables turned here...Oliver totaly lost control of Voldemort.I like that natalie is going to Harry can't wait to read what's next!
EmmaRiddleDaughteroftheDark
2007-05-06 . chapter 10
Jesus... moses. I don't think that was very smart of Voldemort to give up his identity. If she had lived, which she did, then she could tell everyone. And there's no point in raping her. That's silly, Voldy. What a bad boy he was.
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