omg yo you really know how to make this pairing work. ive read ur other story. its good. this one too. i really hope you havent given up on them and u will update soon. i have to this day never read any better draco/luna fics. please plkease update these stories! amazing!

I really loved it and it was nice to see a Draco and Luna fic without the humor I like most D/L but yours really was good :P

please write more.it it is a great story

"‘LEAVE!’ Draco desperately shouted at her, but out of the corner of his eye, he spotted them. Grabbing his wand back, he stepped in front of Luna. There was a flash of light and then, there was no wondering."

I don't get it, did they kill Draco, or did Draco kill Luna so they wouldn't think he was betraying them? Or what? I'm a wee bit confused, my friend. =P

You say "them" and "they" a lot in this story, which is both repetitive and confusing. But I liked it all the same. Especially how you kept Draco in character.

~Idrinklead

So sad. Draco was so protective over Luna. Loved it!