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ukfan101
2009-09-07 . chapter 3
Hey are you going to continue on with this story? I enjoyed reading it and was wondering if there was going to be more of it?
spinstitcher
2009-08-15 . chapter 3
What an inventive idea; I love Greek mythology and this was really clever.
wild wolf free17
2008-02-22 . chapter 3
Oh, more in this 'verse please! It's fascinating.
JenBurch
2008-01-28 . chapter 2
I meant to say before that I think you've done a great job showing how things would have changed over the years. With a two hour window every ten years, I could imagine that things would get rather tense and there would have to be difficult times ahead for the brothers, and you've shown that so well! I hate that the brother's are like that, I hate that Dean's happy, I hate that Sam had to hear him say he's happy. It seems strange that Dean isn't fighting against it more, he's not there to protect Sammy after all, how can he be okay with that? And it's SO weird seeing him with kids! lol But all of these things that I hate are also why I love to story, so you gotta keep writing! Please?

Need to read more! Dying, remember? You can save me, you have the antidote! Be my hero? :) hehehehe I can beg and plead with the best of 'em! lol

Seriously, awesome story, gotta be easily one of the best I've read and a great concept! My head's still swimming over that! lol

Keep it up :)
JenBurch
2008-01-28 . chapter 3
I love this story! I cant wait to see more, Sam has to find a way to get Dean out! He has to!

John's gonna die, isn't he, that's why this was the last time John could have been there? Right? I'm right, aren't I? :( He never had a chance to see his son again, did he?

Poor Dean!

UGH! Gotta get more up soon! Need more! Dying over here! :)
JenBurch
2008-01-28 . chapter 1
Wow, what a concept!

I was freaking out at first, the footsteps going along the floor and stuff, it was really eerie!

Then *sigh* It was Dean! I cheered for about two seconds and then got really really sad when I realised that he wasn't back-back, just back for a short time and how horrible that was!

I was surprised when he said he was happy :( Kinda made me ache for Sam... They're going to be apart for so long, it's horrible... and yet painfully angsty and impossible not to read!
Spicy Pear
2007-12-18 . chapter 3
This is such an amazingly original story with such amazing characterizations!! I love it so much! I really can't think of any words to tell you how much I enjoy reading this story.
JHNNangel13
2007-11-06 . chapter 3
May I just say that I reread this one again today and I still love it. The Dean in the underworld and everything...I absolutely love and adore it and hope that you still plan to continue it even though you're busy! Great job again!

Shea
becomingwaturmeanttobe
2007-10-16 . chapter 3
I loved that! Awesome job!
Amy
2007-09-20 . chapter 3
I'm really enjoying this story. Such a unique concept. The family interaction is great, not to mention all the surprises having that special family bring. I find myself wondering where you'll go next. Great update.
lilgurlgreen
2007-09-09 . chapter 3
That was awesome! The part with the other professor was hilarious! The end was sad, but it really fit the story. Update Soon!!
supergirl3684
2007-09-03 . chapter 3
great chapter! I admit, I about cried when I read the end! Great job!!
That Girl Six
2007-09-03 . chapter 2
I've been trying to find a way to review this for the last few weeks after I first caught it. I still haven't quite figured out the words yet. I'm not sure what it is about this story yet. I certainly like it, and I've enjoyed it quite a bit. The writing is tight and to the point. There is nothing about it that I don't like. I think maybe it's just having to keep reminding myself to picture Dean as so much younger compared to Sam that's getting to me? It certainly isn't the easiest story to visualize...

That said, I'm actually pretty amused by this. It's nicely written and I love the way your mind works. Heh. You've definitely done your research and found a rather interesting way to bring it about. Very, very nice. I can't wait to see what you're going to do to them next.

Happy writing!
aprun
2007-09-02 . chapter 3
This is getting sad. Sean Winchester is going to die, and in a few chapters, Sam will die, but will be rejoined with Dean? And What about the yellow-eyed demon?!?!
alwaysateen
2007-09-02 . chapter 3
I love this story.
Dean was so funny, sitting at Sam's desk and discussing with the students and that mean guy! Lol
I hope we gonna have a lot more chapters coming up!
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