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I-luv-to-write-law-and-order
2008-10-27 . chapter 1
Oh my gosh, that was hilarious! It's just so darn fluffy, and then woosh, its not like your perverted mind thinks. Luv it!
autumngold
2008-10-15 . chapter 1
What? What gutter? I wasn't thinking that? I knew what was going on!! :) Ok, maybe not, but I love this story!! I love the Captain's misunderstanding the best!! See, I'm not the only one thinking things like that!! ;)
SatisfactionBroughtBackTheCat
2007-07-11 . chapter 1
(rolling on the floor laughing) oh...my sides...thats just priceless. (laughs again) oh god
Ashley
2007-06-24 . chapter 1
hahaha fabulous!
Edochan
2007-04-16 . chapter 1
Oh my god, that made me laugh so hard! "stiff flesh" hahaha! I was gonna read it for the smut, but that was all good too ;)
kateBA
2007-04-16 . chapter 1
Now, tell me this, if it was so innocent why would they need to be in a secluded storage room that everyone seems to have forgotten about? For the record, I think Bobby wouldn't be caught dead watching Seinfeld.
Leatah
2007-04-15 . chapter 1
what can I say, my dirty little mind was in the same place as everyone elses...loved the ending...think it would be great if explaining...Alex demonstrates on the Captain himself...and relizes her "hidden" talent...you really should do a 2nd chap...thanks
underarrest39
2007-04-15 . chapter 1
lol that was funny. my god we people are so dirty minds. Hahaha! i love it! but seriously who doesnt think that way when the first line is 'he needed it. bad.' :) nice job! virtual high five :)
Kismet23
2007-04-15 . chapter 1
Heh. I *like* my mind right where it is, in the gutter as usual, thanks. I loved this; so much fun, and a great ending, plus detailed imagery all the way along. As always, most excellent reading from you!
Rennie
2007-04-15 . chapter 1
very funny!! I'm a shipper, so you got me!!
Scripted Starlet
2007-04-15 . chapter 1
I love you more with each passing story.

I guessed somewhere in the ballpark when it came to the punchline but nothing could've prepared me for how fluidly you delivered it. The HISTORY CHANNEL! Omg, you're awesome. That's so Goren. We should all erect little E.H. statues and then ponder your magnificence.

Thanks for the ** & giggles,

S.S.
deliriousdancer
2007-04-15 . chapter 1
^climbs up from the gutter* That was cute.
danielle
2007-04-15 . chapter 1
But the gutter is so much fun. Nice job
raz0r.girl
2007-04-15 . chapter 1
Hee :-D

But it wouldn't have been as much fun had my mind not been in the gutter.
Norla
2007-04-15 . chapter 1
That was too funny! I had a feeling at the start it was going to have a twist! I loved it! I'm picturing the look on Ross' face! Thank you for sharing! I needed that giggle!
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