 I-luv-to-write-law-and-order 2008-10-27 . chapter 1Oh my gosh, that was hilarious! It's just so darn fluffy, and then woosh, its not like your perverted mind thinks. Luv it! |
 autumngold 2008-10-15 . chapter 1 What? What gutter? I wasn't thinking that? I knew what was going on!! :) Ok, maybe not, but I love this story!! I love the Captain's misunderstanding the best!! See, I'm not the only one thinking things like that!! ;) |
 SatisfactionBroughtBackTheCat 2007-07-11 . chapter 1(rolling on the floor laughing) oh...my sides...thats just priceless. (laughs again) oh god |
 Ashley 2007-06-24 . chapter 1 hahaha fabulous! |
 Edochan 2007-04-16 . chapter 1 Oh my god, that made me laugh so hard! "stiff flesh" hahaha! I was gonna read it for the smut, but that was all good too ;) |
 kateBA 2007-04-16 . chapter 1Now, tell me this, if it was so innocent why would they need to be in a secluded storage room that everyone seems to have forgotten about? For the record, I think Bobby wouldn't be caught dead watching Seinfeld. |
 Leatah 2007-04-15 . chapter 1what can I say, my dirty little mind was in the same place as everyone elses...loved the ending...think it would be great if explaining...Alex demonstrates on the Captain himself...and relizes her "hidden" talent...you really should do a 2nd chap...thanks |
 underarrest39 2007-04-15 . chapter 1lol that was funny. my god we people are so dirty minds. Hahaha! i love it! but seriously who doesnt think that way when the first line is 'he needed it. bad.' :) nice job! virtual high five :) |
 Kismet23 2007-04-15 . chapter 1Heh. I *like* my mind right where it is, in the gutter as usual, thanks. I loved this; so much fun, and a great ending, plus detailed imagery all the way along. As always, most excellent reading from you! |
 Rennie 2007-04-15 . chapter 1 very funny!! I'm a shipper, so you got me!! |
 Scripted Starlet 2007-04-15 . chapter 1I love you more with each passing story.
I guessed somewhere in the ballpark when it came to the punchline but nothing could've prepared me for how fluidly you delivered it. The HISTORY CHANNEL! Omg, you're awesome. That's so Goren. We should all erect little E.H. statues and then ponder your magnificence.
Thanks for the ** & giggles,
S.S. |
 deliriousdancer 2007-04-15 . chapter 1^climbs up from the gutter* That was cute. |
 danielle 2007-04-15 . chapter 1 But the gutter is so much fun. Nice job |
 raz0r.girl 2007-04-15 . chapter 1Hee :-D
But it wouldn't have been as much fun had my mind not been in the gutter. |
 Norla 2007-04-15 . chapter 1That was too funny! I had a feeling at the start it was going to have a twist! I loved it! I'm picturing the look on Ross' face! Thank you for sharing! I needed that giggle! |