That was... brilliant! Wonderously thought out and written, and, though not in the dialect of JRR Tolkien himself, I'd have to say it was a close second.

Something that I really enjoy about this story is the lack of modernization. It is without the common slash fics that others boldly present in this category, something I would never even go near.
Very nice how you added in the little piece with Samwise's second child, making his life seem so normal from what it once was not long ago before they returned to the Shire.
Interesting also, how Frodo gradually discovers where he would like to go, instead of an instanteous thought, you drew it out more.

This is probably the best LoTR fanfic that I have ever had the pleasure to read. Thank you!

~(Zealak Silverdirk)~