Reviews for Just Stay Alive

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Cari 2008-05-07 ch 40, anon.	abuseGreat! I'm definetly a fan!
Cari 2008-05-07 ch 18, anon.	abuseaw, too bad that's all about to be wrecked T_T
Cari 2008-05-07 ch 6, anon.	abuseI really like how Archie is so awesome in this, he never gets enough attention ^_^
Grand Puba of All The Smurf... 2008-03-12 ch 40,	abuseI love the Gregangst, and I'm glad Archie gets a part.
Radical Pretense Gothica 2007-12-25 ch 40,	abuseGod, that story rocked. Loved it, man.
MissCsi2008 2007-10-30 ch 40,	abuseI love this story, But what happened to Fated i liked that story it was awesome, I hope fated or whatever you are going to call it is up soon. Really good story. Sarah
10,000-points-to-me-! 2007-10-21 ch 2, anon.	abusei really like your story. poor greg going through all of those tortures. i dont know why but i enjoy seeing greg suffer. (im no sadist trust me.) and you are doing a great job doing that. keep working on "fated" and post it asap. im still waiting for it. good luck!
MissCsi2008 2007-09-30 ch 8,	abuseThis story is amazing. This is the third time i've read it and my mouth is still agape. I noticed you took Fated down. When will you be putting it back up? It was such a good plot with Nicky and Greg. It keeps me on my toes! Sarah.
Krysnel Domeri Nicavis 2007-07-01 ch 40,	abuseWow, that was truly an emotional story! I loved it, you really captured the sense of what they were feeling! And the last 4 chapters were friggin' hilarious! Nick is hysterically funny doped up!
dontstayfallen 2007-06-18 ch 1, anon.	abuseHEY! I like it! And wow, that guy at the end, he basically just murdered another guy and now he's worried about his ice cream?! Eek. Now I gotta keep reading!
FiveForFighting09 2007-06-15 ch 2,	abuselol. Nick got attacked with a cane. the he hids behind Warrick. lol. poor Greg. no wonder he neevr wants to go back to that apartment.
FiveForFighting09 2007-06-15 ch 1,	abusegood first chapter. i like it how Warrick and Nick "protect" Greg. aye Greg.
Acacia Jules 2007-06-13 ch 3,	abuseOk, you have a good story started here. But there are a few things I've noticed thus far (up to chapter 3), you might want to look into fixing. CHAPTER 1: You use the term 'evidence' or 'the evidence' too much. It's just repetitive. I'm guessing that you don't want to reveal what this thing Greg discovered was yet (or possibly you don't even know yet), but there are many different words and terms you could use instead. Key factor, answer, key, (just say) discovery, etc. A thesaurus is a mystery writer's best friend when trying to be vague. CHAPTER 3: Based upon what you wrote in your author's notes previously, having only watched the first two seasons, I was under the assumption that this takes place then. As such, Greg is not a CSI. Greg was a lab geek. The DNA lab was his domain. He was the lab's DNA technician, until he decided to escape from the lab (especially after it blew up, with him in it), and take the major pay-cut that would go hand in hand with learning to be a CSI. Oh, another thing, I recommend you get a beta to proof all your chapters. I noticed many grammar errors, problems with sentence structures, and an extreme lack of commas. This is CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, in hopes that it will assist you becoming a more polished writer, with even better stories as time goes on. There's nothing wrong with going back and editing chapters long after you post them. I, myself often re-edit everything I've ever posted every couple years, in hopes to better convey what I was trying to say at the time, and fix grammatical errors I unknowingly made at the time. I do like the plot so far, and think it could be an absolute shinning example of great Gregangst, with some work. Good luck, and keep writing.
00mrdragon00 2007-05-30 ch 40,	abuseI thought this was a great ending. I'm just a sap for happy endings and I can't wait for the sequel!
SaKuRa-MIna 2007-05-27 ch 40,	abuseHey, Sorry it took me so long to review the rest of the story. I loved it. Oh my gosh. I could not stop laughing when Nick was high on Morphine. My sides started to hurt I was laughing so hard. I loved this last chapter. It was so sweet and adorable. Are you doing a sequel to this story. I can't wait to read...so long as nothing like what happened in this story happens in the sequel. I think I might cry if anything happened. Keep up the great work and good luck!

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