Whoops, just realized (thankfully) that there's another installment after the fourth. Thank God, and sorry for the mistake.

~Tuna

Oh man, things are geting intense. Um, I have nothing much else to say that I haven't already said, but I still love the relationship between Lydia and Warren. It's not too cliche, but it's not too out there. You've done a great job, and I'm jumping into the last (>.<) installment.

I'm shaking in anticipation. Seriously.

~Tuna

aww. tear. i feel uber sorry for Baron. in this story he seems like a very decent man. and maybe behind the scenes of the actual sky high he is, and that his conviction was a whole misunderstanding.

but this was well thought out. And fintan... hmm. never heard of a name like that.

OMG, I'm completely hooked on your Time series. I am obsessed with Lydia and her adventures. Fintan is just oh so mysterious. I'm curious to whether or not Taylor and Shyla begin to play bigger roles now that they're formally family. Off to read the next installment!

that was Good!

AHMAAZZING

I love the whole Baron being a good guy forced into doing what he did! It's so believable!

Nela

Great job, I've really enjoyed it so far and can't wait to read the rest.

Oy, I can't believe I forgot to review the end of this. *blushes* Let's see. I'm glad you polished it up some. I actually understood it this time. Of course I loved Knight. :-P I really like how you've portrayed Baron Battle. I don't think I've seen this side of the issue with him yet. You have a really unique way of writing different takes and ideas that normally people wouldn't think of. That's what makes your Time series so interesting. :-D

m, another interesting, refreshingly unpredictable segment of this story.
Nice to see the blendings of black and white moving into grey from both angles.
I love your work

I was supposed to review a long long time ago, but with finals ah! I didn't get a chance. So I apologize.
Now onto the review.
Although I'm saddened by the fact that Lydia and Warren are not staying together, I like that they really want to. It's such a bittersweet sort of ending and it works so well. I absolutely love the final letter to Warren's mom.
It's very interesting that you have Lydia meet Baron in the end because that just opens it up for more on this series. You did that very well, I might add. It gives more to the sweetness of the situation, the reader knows that for the most part Baron Battle is a good guy but had to risk everything for family just as Warren is doing. Then there's Warren's Mom's side who is in fact very evil. Like I said you do a very good job of putting that through.
Honestly not much to add to that in means of criticism because I think you did this last chapter very well. There wasn't a lot of Warren/Lydia interaction as in mushy-sappy stuff, but it was played off very well. I still like the live Shakespeare production you put for Lydia's birthday (tangent) I'm in London right now studying Shakespeare... oh well. I eagerly await the next of the series, hopefully it gets out sooner than September.
Happy Writing!

wow...that was amazing
but again no end, not really an end it´s open and that sucks
but i love it

I LOVE your series, this story is amazing. I can't wait for more, but I have to wait until September? :( Oh well, and great job on the writing.

Hey! Sorry that it took so long to read this...I had no time. Although now I wish I had made some, this was a wonderful ending and I can't wait to find out how this all turns out...september can't come soon enough. Good luck with whatever you are doing right now, and have a good summer :)

I absolutely love the series. You are an amazingly talented writer. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue it as soon as possible.