I loved this story. I really love the more poetic, stylised kind of writing as well, and I think you really pulled it off. Plus, there's nowhere near enough decent Gippal x Rikku fluff out there. xD

It's very well written! Good job.
I couldn't really picture Rikku as a crazy person though, crazy like that I mean. But a lot of things you wrote in this story makes sense, like Rikku wanting to have her own story.
Or how they met.
Well anyways, very good job on this one and I hope you'll write more :)
Bye!