is this dead?
because I really really REALLY love it!
pls continue!

;)

Ah, Elphie...your wit never ceases to amuse.

Thank you for another great chapter. I totally understand senior year stress. Holy **...3 months! *dies*

I hope you update soon! The story is awesome :)

interesting, please update soon.

Having spent the day wiping boogers off a two year old, I have to say...nothing matches when they lay their head on your neck and hold your with their sticky hands. That is true love. But I also love this story, as usual. Elphie is sharp and spectacular. Much kudos.

Hi! It's good to read some more of your stuff.

Ah yes. Senior year of high school. I can't believe that I'm going to be graduating from college next year. O.o Wow...I just realized that I started reading Wicked fanfiction the summer before I began my Freshman year of college. Not only that, the first Wicked story I read was one of yours.

Freaky.

Ugh. I'm so sorry! I could've sworn that I reviewed Chapter 12. I loved the end of the chapter, where all three of them were finally reunited.

As for Chapter 13...Liir is the cutest thing ever! And the little snip of motherly affection from Elphaba was so sweet.

Hmm...all of this business with Morrible and the dwarf looks interesting. I hope you update soon. Have fun during your senior year. Trust me, it's the best year of high school. : )

YAY an Update! I feel you on the senior year crap, mine is in college, but I remember senior year of high school. Good luck.
Anyways, love the chapter. Too bad she couldn't get out before Morrible needed her. But then the story wouldn't be nearly as amusing. Cant wait to find out what the job is, and read another chapter so update again soon, or as soon as possible.

Again, dropping by to say that I love your Wicked fic (even the dead-ish ones). Do you know, it was some of your writing ("The Crucible" in particular) that originally awed me and made me work to improve? Anyway, I'm dangerously on the way to babbling, so my many thanks.

Yay! an update!

"Patronize me again and we will be... yours." Hah. Nice.

I love your description of the gardens. It's so... I don't know. You take the Emerald City, which from the book is fairly dark and gloomsome (I don't think that's a word, but it seems to fit) and you stick in these occasional momentary little beautiful things like gardens or Elphaba as Fae. It makes me smile. =)

My math teacher is also rather incomprehensible. Good luck with senior year, then. And thanks. Ah, I love this story so much...

I love this fic! And that last line!

Aww! I want more!
Sorry I didn't read and review sooner...Senior year. xP
Keep up the excellent work

This is beautiful and wonderful, as usual. :-)

Awesome!! Update soon!!

Oh, I've missed this! And a happy late Lurlinemas to you too.

Comment on eleven:
"But here, with Fiyero, even if he was too weak and exhausted to have spoken much, Elphaba was Fae, and Fae, here, in a shift with her hair loose was not unkempt or ugly, but an avenging green angel with every advantage on her side, and despite everything she was lovely, and Morrible could, to her disgust, tell this."
But of course- she's different, when she's there, when she's Fae. Yes. Thank you.

I love that Fiyero's still got a sense of humor. And as always, you've captured everything perfectly and your writing style is fantastic, and I haven't got much more to say except thank you for sharing. So thank you. See you again soon, I hope.