"the most glorious phrase in the history of the planet."
lol. teen boys

Eep! Next time. Lizwin rocks!

Again I like your writing. And again I like the last line!

Keep going!

loved it update soon

this was very cute, and very in-character. good work!

I just want to know why every Lizwin fanfic that I read is only a one-shot. But the pairing is still a good one. Keep writing.

cute!!

Very cute. A great piece of Lizwin fluff! :D

Darling, this is begging for a sequel. Can't you hear it?

oh very nice.

I love these fluffy little pieces of Lizwin. Nice work.

Oh and this:
"He had always suspected that when Derek said "kissing," he actually meant "kissing and everything that stems from it," but Edwin appreciated his brother's somewhat uncharacteristic efforts to preserve his innocence."

Made me smile. Nice work.

haha...i liked that...it was so sweet...and i really don't see it as incestural...i guess i'm just crazy...but it was good.

Awe
to cute!
now i'm all smiley and giggly
lol, you know you do a good job when i giggle..lol..
to to to cute!!

Aw! I love it! There are too few Lizwin stories out there.

Beautifully done.

The countdown was a little awkward, but I think with their highly unusual situation, theres definitely going to be some hilarious awkward moments.

Can't wait for chapter two. There are just not enough Lizwin's on the site.

Great job. However, it's not incest since they're not blood-related. You have to share genes for it to be incest. Catch ya on the flip side.