I likey this a lot, please continue! Ray's gonna seriously have double trouble & this is coming from me a twin herself!

ah! please update soon!

ooh, you're mean, you don't update for ages and then you drop that on us! Meanie! Evil writer...but good writer :)

Nice job and it is nice that Neela trusts Ray so much.

Great story! I'm in anticipation about what happens next so update soon! :)

Me too, aren't reviews just the best! Can't wait till the next chappie! keep 'em coming!

i liked this : ) and im excited to see how ray's gonna fit into all of this : ) please update soon

Love it! I started one of these Neela twon things too but I got bored. I'm glad you're doing it!

Oh!

Good writing, love your writing!

I feel so sorry for Lalita, how did I know it was Neela's twin sister? lol

Update Soon,

Amythest Girl

I'm intrigued to see how Ray is going to fit into this...is he going to be the protective friend/older brother? Something else? :)

Amazing job and I am eagerly awaiting the next one.

great start! I'm desperate for new chapters now...

OMG PLEASE CONTINUE!

UPDATE SOON!

PLEASE!

UR KILLING ME!

(not literally cause then I would know what would happen in this story)

update Soon,

Amythest Girl.

Fantastic start and I can't wait for more.