soo, I'm a big Jane Austin fan, and I notcide that the begining of the story is like the begining of pride and prejudice but replaced by your own ideas.
Nice story, but not ouran style, but different, which is good too.

Beautifully written, and unimaginably fun to read. :) You are an excellent author.

Goodness!This is such a beautiful piece!You portraye Tamaki perfectly!~
And the idea of him being a teacher sounds interesting too~

Kawaii.

Beautiful one-shot. I loved the twists and turns in their relationship that are distinct characteristics of the Ouran series. Great job! And I loved Himeko XD

I love the idea of Haruhi proposing. My favorite part: "Some happy endings, he was learning, took a detour and ran over a few caution cones by accident before they were on course..."

Well MY favorite part is when their daughter tells him Kyoya's teaching her international investment XP Omg I just love him *dreamy sigh*

Lol,very creative writing style.I love that she's like her mother,all we're missing now is just another optimistic,smart idiot hehe!

So cute anyways,good jobby!
-may*
...haha,sensei...annuity...XD

Cute and wonderful. I loved it. :) I especially loved his grandmother showing up to visit him and offer the family fortune and him likewise turning it down! That was the high point for me, how he remembered a time where he was just like his grandmother where 'money' was needed to 'improve' a commoner's (Haruhi's) position in life. ^.^ Loved the story, and I'm usually not a fan of Tamaki/Haruhi. I am so stealing your quotes because it applies I find it applies to me. "Still an optimistic fool, I see." "But a happy fool." Oh, oh! And can't forget 'Uncle' Kyouya! XD I was snerking when his daughter was using so very big words! :D All in all I give you ten stellas of ten~

OH-SO-CUTE. I love Tama/Haru future fics! (Himeko was LOVE, by the way)

Aww...Such a nicely characterized fanfic... -nods- You really know what you're doing when you're writing this stuff. Sneaking in bits of deep stuff there is great... :D

it's written like it was a classic novel... not everyone could easil figure everything out easily... but i did... so i would be nice if you would write your next fanfic in an irdinary way ^_^ just a suggestion ^_^

Excellent! Very impressed with the vocabulary. Interesting. Very interesting. Anyway, I wish I could say something more productive, but I'm so tired, my head is swimming, so anything even remotely intelligent that I could try writing would either be stupid or just plain wrong... So-

Ja-ne! ^_-

i love these...and himeko is just too cute.

its so good! absolutly adore this pairing! and the part bout tamaki beiing a happy fool! that is soo true! i think my fav part was uncle kyouya telling her how to invest! thats soo like him! *luved* it!

really cute!