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Dracoqueen22
2007-11-28 . chapter 17
What is there to say? I liked the fic, one of the few Star Ocean ones on this site worth reading. I normally don't like gender changing fics but by the time you threw that little plot in - though I should have seen it coming - I was already hooked on the story and couldn't stop reading it. I love your Albel though. He is so in character that it's wonderful. And your Fayt voice is pretty good, too.

Overall, I enjoyed reading the story. Nice and dark and interesting.
KuroSakura-chan
2007-09-02 . chapter 17
I think deep down I knew it was going to end like that. It's sweet in an angsty sorta way, but I'm ok with that. I'm definetely not disappointed in this fic; on the contrary, I love it. Which makes me remember not planning to finish reading it at the beginning. ^^;;
Anyway, good luck on your next fics!
-KuroSakura-chan
Alzemu
2007-08-29 . chapter 17
Ar...so it's over...that was pretty long. Lol. I still have hard time imagining the two men together in love(although in here Albel seem to be other wise)

Shouldn't argue after reading through the whole thing. lol It's real good to see the end of atleast one of fanfic seeing most of them just tend to die out before finishing lol. ha ha.

Any how, nice job and let me pat you on the back!! lol
Alzemu
2007-08-29 . chapter 16
Ah, why is it that I kinda expected that when you warned a character dying in the beginning?
Alzemu
2007-08-29 . chapter 15
woah, there's an Albel solo ending? I thought there was only fayt-albel pair ending and Fayt solo ending?? WTF??

Oh, and about Adray, that annoying dude has a high affection point in the beginning for everyone and he generally gains more and more through private action no matter what you seem to respond to him. It's like +3 if you say something nice and +5 for saying something mean(and you only get +1 to albel for saying something mean too!!)
Alzemu
2007-08-29 . chapter 14
Next, next, next~~
Alzemu
2007-08-29 . chapter 13
Although Maria doesn't seem to convers much with Albel during the game, it is stated out that her respect point was higher toward albel than any other was to him.

My Maria always gets mad when i try to do something stupid with Albel and he ends up dead. Another evidence that these two respect each other more than they may let on. Although I doubt it's no where enough for a relationship. lol

Sorry just thought would comment on it because of the little Maria info you had in this chap.
Alzemu
2007-08-29 . chapter 12
Yeah, I kinda agree on your end note...it is kinda meh...I was yawning all the way. That isn't to say you are a great writer.
Alzemu
2007-08-29 . chapter 11
I've been putting bunch of one-liner reviews so here's some modification suggests.

"him had not already dead" already died not already dead.

"fall caused an injury " it's fine as it is but I think causes would be much better.

Some people love long reviews and some people like shorter ones. I'm giving you both because I have no idea which you like better. lol

The story seem to get gloomier these chapters though
Alzemu
2007-08-29 . chapter 10
If you wanted to laugh at albel for PMSing then you would need more than a safe distance and shields considering he has far off reaching moves that doesn't require the assistance of his claw arm.
I'd say if you were on a celestial ship then maybe...lol
Alzemu
2007-08-29 . chapter 9
Aw...it's getting too depressing...

And I need to sleep...Will read the rest tomorrow. lol
Alzemu
2007-08-29 . chapter 8
calm in face of cliff...lol
Alzemu
2007-08-29 . chapter 7
I think I'm gonna go land an extra hard blow on Vox next time I fight him in the game lol. I shall personally tear him from limb to limb! RAWR!!
Alzemu
2007-08-29 . chapter 6
ew
Alzemu
2007-08-29 . chapter 5
Wow, Nel's grip is really strong huh?
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