wow. this is really good, i wish you would update this its beautiful that James would be protecting Harry.
Its a really interesting concept which you've handled well so far.
I hope you choose to continue with this.
good job.
Skulblaka

I'm sure you've gotten a million reviews on this story since it was published, and I cannot believe that I have not read it before now. But let me just say this: if you are not in college right this minute, majoring in literature or English and planning to become a writer in some capacity, that is a freakin' crime. I have read some of your other stories today, and simply can't bring myself to believe that you are under 20 years old. You write like someone 20 years older, and I'm talking subject matter as well as style. This was written a few years ago now, which makes the insight and maturity even more astounding. Please, please keep writing, I beg you. You have something to say, and you say it well. That is all.

Silv You are so evil to these people agh and me you just stop writing and give up on the story when you need to keep writing. You are so self cantious, your writing may have in proved but it doesn't make this story bad. Julia Alexis Silver Truman. You are gonna right more of this story and the Careful what you wish for. Do you have any idea how many people are disapointed when the stories haven't been updated. You think you can just leave billions of people waiting for an update on a story that is never gonna be updated you say you won't leave um but you do. Wooh sorry Silv needed to get that out. Seriously though write more please. Really sorry about the rant thing but hey what hp fanfic sisters for we get under your skin and into your stories but we love you. One more thing people have probably already given up on them. Even thought one day you will write more and know one will know because its been to long your losing readers here so c'mon and don't give me any crap about writters block in fact know more new stories until you ad a couple more chapters to your old ones OKAY. *deep breaths* sighs sorry

-jedi mind trick-

you want to update this...

This is an uber interesting concept... or rather, an interesting interpretation of an often used concept. I like. Hope you update soon!

*Me The Cat*

ok this is it you write to many good stoies the leave them in the dust. i know where you live and know i'm not folowing you.
write more my friend the yellow eyed demon bear will have a few things to say.

Oh wow, definitely a very interesting concept. Why do you have it as complete? I think it would be very interesting if you went into detail about how James helped, like Harry's story through his eyes, and what he did. I'll put this on my alerts list just in case!

This was very creative! I can't wait to read the other two parts!

this is good

And u want to do this in only a series of three oneshots? Well you've got my attention lol.

Very interesting.
More please!

-looks guiltily at pile of homework-

oh, well. this is much more fulfilling.

seriously, sp, where the hell did you come up with this? it's so damn creative, i'm jealous. i mean, i'm loving it so far.. it's very eloquent, very slow paced (for now, which is good) - i love your indifferent!james here, it works so well.

'Maybe it’s because it’s Harry and somewhere he remembers loving his son. Maybe it’s because he thinks Lily would want this, and somewhere, that matters to him. Maybe it’s because he remembers what it was like to be James—the real, alive James—for a split second.'

jeez. talk about a line.

your purgatory is oddly amusing. rooms marked 'one more chance', haha. i mean, i'm not a religious person at all (quite the opposite), but you made this significantly religious aspect both captivating and believable.

please please please write more of this. this should be longer than three chapters! (and thank god you're writing harry potter again, i was missing you!)

love,
ds

Yay for SilverWeasley, who finally wrote another Harry Potter story for the first time in like, forever.
The idea of you story is definately original, I'll give you that. So I hope you update soon.

I really like the idea of god being man nor woman and humans not being able to comprenhend it. Also right now Harry is 11 and James will be with him until he's 19 right ? Is this a James centric piece.

You really were in an unpleasant mood when you wrote this, like you said. It's an interesting idea.

Is what Harry sees in the Mirror of Erised when he gets the Philosopher's Stone going to, in fact, be James? After all, they are supposed to look very much alike, and Peter said nothing about James' reflection being invisible, just James himself.