this is f*king awesome story, i love this so much! :D<3
hope you wrote soon more =)=)=)=) gary is cute in this :D i lov that somebody is like.. err.. what that word is ... lets say that he is INTERESTING person.yap. ( and the ansgt is so cute aww)

sry my bad english, im fron finland so... :'D

hm.. yeah, if you dont get it, i LOVE this fic. Its the bestest what i've been reading in anywhere O.O<3

Palletshipping<3 aaws.

btw, i got feeling that Gary had something.. anorexia? or something that.

Ek!! An update, I nearly died! XD
I didn't read when it was unedited so that doesn't matter to me, but I'm just so happy you're writing this again. It's AWESOME.
I can't wait to see May! And Richie, wow that's a blast from the past! you really are old-school with this aren't you? And I'm loviing it! keep up your awesome work x

Sometime during this chapter I kinda teared up from the cute and angst and frustrationy bits. I'm still horribly confused about why Gary came back, since everyone but Ash knows by now sorta and Ash is so stubborn and silly that he'll not find out for an incredibly long amount of time.

ANYway, I'm grateful you continue this, I was so happy another chapter was posted, and I look forward to another installment. Aw, Ash, just... just use your head! Thinking is good. And Gary, stop being an **. Gah.

I'm loving it.

asdfghj, I was so excited when I received the new chapter alert;
thank you so much for continuing this fic.

Such a cute chapter, I love the mix of confused, clueless and jealous Ash :3 Definitely looking forward to more!

dont worry even if no one else is still reading this (which im sure is not the case) u can be sure that i am and i cant wait for the next chapter plz update asap! :)

I love love love love love this fic!

I like the whole gradual buildup to their friendship that's going on... the story's always interesting; I'm never disappointed.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

<3

i <3 this story pls update soon!!

This is such a well written fic, everyone is perfectly in character and it flows so well, funny too! ^^ I hope you'll update soon because that cliffhanger was just mean :B

Oh wow, I really like this fic. Its very interesting, and words can't express my liking for it. Very nice plot, and awesome writing.
Nicely done!
AF

I just love this fic, I can't tell you how glad I am that you're going to continue it! I had lost hope that there would be any updates at all. A great chapter, this last one. It's so frustrating but so exciting to see how they get to each other. I do hope they'll get over themselves though, I think they're meant to be together. I hope you manage to update soon!

*squeals* I just love this story!! best poke-fic i've read in ages. For some reason i always have such a hard time finding ones with characterization and a storyline you could actually believe happening, but this is awesome.

Can't wait for more.

omg i love this story and really hope that you will be able to update soon!

Is this the part where I prod the author for an update? It's been over a year, dude. I can totally understand loosing interest in a fic (been there, done that) but you might at least make a note that you aren't updating anymore in the summary...or something. WIPs are so frustrating.

That said, this is one of the best satoshi/shigeru on the site and I'm still hoping for another chapter. :D

XD; Ugh, what a horridly late review...please forgive me! I've been very busy; i'm starting college!

anyway, i hope you update this soon! It really is very funny, and i've missed reading about Gary's awesomeness and Ash's jealousy! ^^

YES FINISH! ITS AWESOME- I LOVE LONG STORIES LIKE THIS D:

Please continue !!