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| CrayonsPink 2008-07-18 ch 1,  | abuseThis was great, please update soon! |
| Aiwendil1 2008-07-16 ch 1, | abuseHey! I absolutely loved your Snape! You caught on the way he acted in the books and mended his characteristics fantastically with what was needed for your own story. Awesome. Him trying to hate Harry and finally noticing that he can't... Beautiful. Thanks a lot for this and keep writing, ai |
| xHarryIsMyHomeboyx 2008-07-04 ch 1, | abuseOh I love it! Snape was so Snape-esque! Where was Hermione, though? I think there was one line that describes her facial expression, and then your (amazing) story never mentioned her again. I thought she'd have a lot to say on the subject, and be beside Ron at the end of the class, wanting to stay with Harry. Also, she'd be working with Neville, and Seamus would be working with Dean. Just a minor point. I LOVE this. Great, great job! |
| grey-shadow-horse 2008-04-11 ch 1, | abusenice chapter :) |
| Gladys 2008-03-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseYour story is brillant, I really love it. Don't you want to write a sequel? Please! *puppy eyes* |
| Cowabunga 2008-02-27 ch 1, | abuseI like it |
| gaap237 2007-12-19 ch 1, | abuseLoved it. I think you portrayed Snape very well. |
| ShadowedHand 2007-09-17 ch 1, | abuseWell-written. It's always gratifying to whip the blindfold away from Snape's eyes, too, especially at the beginning before all the pain and angst. |
| Angels Broken Shadow 2007-08-24 ch 1, | abuseFantastic. Everyone was in character. Really, really good. |
| Shulblaka Saphira 2007-08-02 ch 1, | abuseShould add more to it, you know. It would make a pretty good story...Well, keep up the good work! |
| Azure Teriques 2007-07-20 ch 1, | abuseIt's really good. I like how is shows how much Snape and Harry are alike, even if they don't realize it. |
| Aldavinur 2007-06-10 ch 1, | abuseHm, sad little story, but very well written. I'm glad that Snape had to realize that there is more to Harry than just his surname, more behind his appearance. |
| luvbooks 2007-06-04 ch 1, | abusewow i love this story |
| Natasha Vloyski 2007-05-18 ch 1, | abuseYou have encapsulated a moment in time and made it very believeable- for the most part. A few minor changes would make it smoother and more readable, but it was very good. Natasha |
| Kiki Cabou 2007-05-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseWell done! I was very engaged. This had a nice, subtle quality about it that made everything feel real. I appreciate realism a lot more than over-the-top drama, and since a lot of works in this vein lean in that direction, it was nice to read one that doesn't. Great job. :) |