It says your posted this in 2007! Please finish the story! I love it! Please~

I can't wait for the next Chapter! Love the work!

I love the tone and style of this story! The lines you write are just priceless. Kudos for two awesome chapters!

Please keep writing!

omg I love it! Update soon! Please!

nice story! wonder what'll happen?

oh I love ur start of the story!
bery nice!
i cant wait till u update!

ahaha, my jaw dropped when I heard ryoma say I'm sick of tennis! xP lols.!

LOL, I love Sakuno, shes so cool! If anyone was like her in real life, they'd be the laughing stock of society xp.

I hope we get to know the reason why Ryoma was so sick of tennis, cus' I'm dying to know with my curiosity haha. Are we going to get any idea why in the next chapter? Looking forward to the next chapter, hope you update soon!

Interesting, I got thefeeling though that Ryoma would turn down Momo's invitation cause he is hard headed and stubborn. Once he set his mind into something, he would definitely would make sure he do it!

"Birds sang, fish swam, and Echizen Ryoma played tennis. That was the natural balance of the world."
i loved this line
"Ryoma throwing off the balance of the world was not very funny. Soon the sky would fall, all land would sink beneath the ocean, and Horio-kun would have two eyebrows."
and I loved the part about Horio

Woo an update! So slow thought :( Update soon!! Momo-sempai ^_^

Nice update! But really... is he going to turn down Momo?

Interesting. Really interesting ^^ I've read lots of Tennis related stuff revolving around RyoSaku but this one's really interesting. Ryoma saying that tennis makes him sick? Oh that's new. Maybe he beat down his oyaji before he took grandslam titles? Hahaha! That would've been funny.

We'll be waiting for your updates so take your time!

This is really good. I can't wait until you write again.

An unbelievable plot... but an amazing one too!

Update again soon! Love the story so far!

YAY! This is great!! I love all your descriptions and the thing about the world losing its balance~! w< Please update soon! It's summer!! =D *dances*