Three weeks ago, I was annoyed by the fact that I could not beat Saddler in that final chapter. And so, three weeks ago, I went to FF .net for some new breath of air. And three weeks ago, I found your other fic, Faith, but seeing that that one was a sequel to Hope, I'd serendipitously stumbled upon this amazing fic!

I'm sorry to be reviewing this so late, but better late than never right? But your fic had kept me up that night, awing me with your composition of words and the simple, albeit poignant plot. This fic was one of the very rare fics that gave me such an impact-- the whole storyline (and that fluffy feeling gotten from those Leonada moments) just wouldn't leave my head for at least three days.

In short, I simply adore and love your story to itsy bitsy bite sized bits. (Though these words, imho, are not enough to convey exactly how much I love it)

I'm off to read Faith now :) Keep it up!

I suppose it's about time now to stop being a hypocrite and review something I've read!

So after luckily stumbling upon Faith, I took a stroll back to your profile in search of the story inspiring it. Found it. Read it. Was surprised.

The basic story line--Saddler knocks out Ada, she has dreams about her fluffy future with Leon, wakes up to realize it was all a dream--was shocking with it's... well, simplicity. After having read the first couple chapters of Timeless, reading this felt wrong on so many levels. Where was the tragedy? Where was the angst-around-every-corner that made the moments they spent together ever the sweeter? At first, it was truly unsettling. Almost as unsettling as Ada's situation. Almost. (But then I'm also someone who has an easy gag reaction to copious amounts of fluff. I digress.)

But by the last chapter, I'd learned to appreciate the variety of AdaLeon love this story had to offer and it's easy-to-grasp-ability. Of course, the dream ended all too soon, and it was nice to see them get back to the way things were meant to be... well, with a little twist. ;) That's truly the way things were meant to be.

Kudos to having the courage to use such a simple plot line, and being able to use it so well--without over complicating things. It's definitely hard to strike the delicate balance between giving the satisfaction of finishing a winding story full of back-stabbing twists, mortal danger, and emotional roller coasters, and the warm, fuzzy feeling gotten from finishing a story written for that exact purpose... but I think you've managed to certainly come within range. :)

Seems as if you have the foundation of a legend at your very fingertips, did you know? :P Bravo. Buona fortuna!

Oh, I see. So what she was imagining-being married to Leon was an illusion. Very, very interesting. Wow, amazing story.

Wow, that must be scary for Ada. One minute she's fighting Saddler and getting the sample, the next minute she's in a house with Leon and married. :o

Very, very well written.

This is really an awesome story, and I mean that in every way possible. Seriously; I hope I'll get that good someday. Downloaded to my laptop so I can read it anytime.

You write the most wonderful Leon/Ada fics. Everyone was in character, and I love how it fits very well into the actual game. Ada really needs a head start and a strong push in the right direction when it comes to emotional matters. Although I'm not too fond of OCs in most stories, I really liked her grandmother, as well as her daughter.

Leon's such a sweetie, and probably the only one that can deal with and love someone like Ada. Other men would have jumped off a cliff by now XD. Going to read the sequel now~ Hopefully Ada will realize that she's awfully lucky to have someone like Leon waiting for her to come around. I enjoyed reading this very much!

Okay, let's review, folks.

Sorry but I can't say much. I really, really liked this fic. it was Awesome ! Better than endless sentences, I'll just say that was one of the best fic I read.

Now, to the critics... less' see...Ahah ! You spelled Birkin "Burkin" ! This fic is dull ! you're a good for nothing !

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Okay, just kidding, please don't aim that ( empty ? ) gun at me Xp...

Okay, now to the next fic : Faith Yay !

Wow! This was an amazing fic! My favorite scene was the porch scene--I was listening to David Bowie's "Something in the Air" when I was reading that part and it fit so perfectly with it! Ada/Leon forever! :)

That was very fun to read! XD I love your writing style, its VERY good, very professional!^^ I really enjoyed reading it!
~Hibari_Sky

OH MY GOD!!
That´s what I said as well when I read your fic!
It´s amazing!! so beautiful! I adore it!!
I promise to keep it up, but I would love to ask you something. I bumped into you because a friend liked a fanart I did on Ada and Leon and recommended your work. Would you mind taking a glance into my work? it would be a honor to me.
The link is http://denebtenoh./art/Enemy-mine-43458739.
See you soon! I promise I´ll read all of your fics! you´re an amazing writer!!

A fantastic piece of fiction, eloquently written but not overdone. Most people have to create their own situation in order to make a fanwork of romance, but you managed to take the plot of the game itself and turn it into something more. Truly well done.

I'm glad that i found this to break the time until Faith's newest chapter. Original, thoughtful, and written excellently!

-sniffle.- What a bittersweet ending, but I had to expect it. It was a great ending, really. Such a wonderful story... pretty much encompassing all of the reasons I'm a Leon/Ada fan. I can't say anything else except for AMAZING.

Omigod, I can't wait to read about Leon saving Ada. It's so awesome... I love this fanfiction. Hands down my favorite Leon/Ada piece.

Yay! Ada and Leon fluff! I love it! Great job.