LOVED IT...

Beautiful ending to a fantastic story! What a great version of Edward and Bella's story... I almost think I like it better than SM's version!

Wow, wow, wow! :D

Loved your story. Powerful and full of love and devotion. Thank you.

Okay- I didn't understand that email at all...I don't speak computer geek!

I really loved this whole story. Worth the read.

I really like it. Some of the parts where Edward is hearing thoughts aren't in italics and it's confusing. I'm not sure if he is really hearing other people or if it's his own thoughts.

ok, you gotta be kidding me ! this story os freakin genius !
I actually hated you (not literally xD) for making Bella making forget Jake that she ever existed (But it made the story real good, so I actually can't hold a grudge against you for it). That part was real sad. Just by reading it, I really could feel the whole tension building up, literally see everything infront of me happening.
This, TDDOT, whole nother league, I actually planned on studying for a chem test, but I just couldn't stop reading !
I love how you wrote every character's personality. Especially Carlisle, Esme and well the entire gang xD.
Currently writing my own fanfic. I know one thing, never going to get remotely as good as yours.
PLS PLS PLS , write another fanfic. You are incredible talented. So give us another fanfic ! xD

luving every moment

i like it

I read all of Becoming Whole and now all of TDDOT but I am confused. Why did TDDOT end with the wedding night and not the Charlie incident and the Jacob incident? I was looking forward to Edward's POV for those situations.

great chapter. how come u left it at the certain spot. hope u can come up with ideas of edwards point of view of the jacob part that might be coming up. this is a great story. keep it up.
ilani

So I read Becoming Whole and on your recommendation I am now reading The Dark Dance of Temptation. So far it is wonderful! I am curious as to what it was nominated for and how that came to be.

You were absolutely correct when you said that I would like "The Dark Dance of Temptation." I can't even tell you how much I enjoyed it. Writing is definitely your forte. Please continue in it, you have so much to offer the world. Also, thanks for the recommendations, I look forward to checking them out, but I must say, you are a hard act to follow!

You write really well. I haven't read your other stories, but I can say that Midnight Sun was my favorite Twilight "book", so I liked the EPOV, and you captured it beautifully. I liked your story and attention to detail. Thanks!

Fabulous! I LOVE reading Edward's POV.