This is a beautiful and creative story. I wish you could continue it because I'm really looking forward to seeing more, even though it has been 7 years lol. It's amazing and you've captured the characters so well and elegantly. Please please pleasee update!

awesome fic! ur such a great writer:) more more more i want more! pretty please:D

i hate kyle..reallyy

The thought interpretations were a good idea.

that was awesome! I luv Aya&Kyle fics., and plus you don't see many of them and yours rules! plz continue, I can't wait to see what happens!

update please!:D

I'm a big fan of the first game and I haven't finished the second, but that's ok... my ps is busted anyway... _;

Wow. Makes me feel like I'm playing the game again but with a deeper look into the characters' emotions this time! Please continue this soon! XD

VERY WELL-WRITTEN, and totally great characterization. I've played through the game countless times, but your writing gives a new light. nicely done, esp the part when aya found the 'whosit' cards and wondered if kyle had a collection. _

Heya! Wonderful! _ Is it just me or this is like a walkthrough of the game lol! J/K.

What I really mean is that you seem to know the story and that it stays quite like in the real thing!(In which they don't show much about anyone's feelings...) I enjoyed your fic in this morn and rainy day in which war gets a word...

I started a Aya-Kyle myself...But I'm not sure to post it yet...! If you want you could come and read it!

I g2g now...!

-LB-

Finally, an Aya/Kyle fic worthy to be called an Aya/Kyle fic! You're an awesome writer...continue! I'm looking forward to it!

This is really great! Will there be a continuation? Hope there would! Hehehe! Update soon!

Finally! You updated! This is TRULY one of the best Parasite Eve fics here! You convey the character's emotions very well!

Keep em comin!

Hi! Sorry if I just resurfaced now! Thanks for reading & bothering to review! - I never acknowledged it before but I really love your comments! THANKS! *huggies* I already love Aya & Kyle, of course Parasite Eve in general... but you guys make writing PE fics even more enjoyable! o

Wonderful story! I love Aya/Kyle fics and there just aren't many of them around. I would love to read more, you're an excellent writer.

Good to see that you finally updated this story! I loved the way Aya was so sarcastic, she may come across as a cool person but if one really pay attention theyll see she has a strong sense of humor. Some comments during the game really made you laugh...

As for Aya/Kyle, I think your novelization is very true to the game. I think this is how Aya fell for him, gradually. Keep writing!