cool update soon

Great fanfic, it was an awesome adventure and it was cute!! ^_^ I'll gonna add this to my favourites

Didn't make me laugh out loud, but I smirked here and there. Um, if you could, next time check the spacing between after punctuation (almost all your periods and commas have no spaces after them). Also misspelled Kaoru at least once.

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oh my... rushed and odd but... cute!^^
i'd have to suggest working on grammar and fleshing out the plot. good work though!

It's pretty good! I like the multiple choices in this story, hm...I wonder what I would pick.

o.O
what is w/ the hokey-pokey?

I love how you just threw in the spongebob song >.>

...um

hah your story is so cute!!

Lol, this is really funny! Please continue! Hmm... I don't have any ideas right now... but just a quick Q.

I haven't seen much of the anime, only the manga. Is it very different? Like, is Shia Kotarou's grandmother in the anime and does she die, like in the manga? Well... sorry, back on subject.

I really want you to update soon!