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AuroraEve
2009-09-22 . chapter 1
Aw! So cute and adorable. *.*
TrinityTepes
2009-09-19 . chapter 1
This is now
one of my favorite
NaruHina oneshots.
Loved it!
Bumblemark
2009-09-18 . chapter 1
W-what?
H-hey! you cheated!
you used the three magic words that always get's me tearing during those kinds of angsty moments...
'don't leave me,'
damn that's not fair :P

well that was nice. wonderfully written and touching on all the right places. definitely worthy of hitting 100 revs.
IMORTAL DARKNESS
2009-09-09 . chapter 1
nice
Freedom Phantom
2009-08-16 . chapter 1
Really, really, really good. Made me cry and many thing can make me cry. At least it ended well. Thumbs up!
Theblackroseofkonoha
2009-08-02 . chapter 1
That was great! I cried when hinata found out though, xD
SkywardShadow
2009-07-11 . chapter 1
I'm not even a NaruHina fan anymore, but that was really great. Very emotional and well written. And with a happy ending! Nicely done. ^^
Stacey.and.stars
2009-07-09 . chapter 1
that was beautiful, I almost cried when naruto was begging her. just wonderful!
TipxBelagame
2009-06-13 . chapter 1
A mixture of coomedy,drama,romance,angst,tradgey all beautifully mixed into one Chapter-rather one shot- of Naruto and Hinatas complicated relationship. Wonderful job with this. Its wasn't short and no detail like other one-shots. This is like my third time reading this story I love it so much.
Romez
2009-04-28 . chapter 1
Wow... that was absolutely stunning! I mean, the detail and the emotions that you brought out from the couple... it was intense. I wish to one day write as eloquently as you. Yup, that's my goal now.

But from the looks of it, I think I have a long way to go! Better start now I suppose.

Great one-shot!
Narai Moroha
2009-01-28 . chapter 1
Ω = (cS[(Twitch + Spaz)× H'(e) + 2NH] — [Eg(D!)] / p{NT + SS + IH} × Q%) + Pµ(Δa / t)

The formula reads as, "Omega equals cS times Twitch-plus-Spaz, times the derivative of H with respect to e, plus two NH, all minus Eg times D factorial, all over the matrix p times Q percent, all plus P times myu times delta a over t."

Using this formula, find the Ω factor where:
c = # of chapters
S = Skill of the writer
e = ending
N = Naruto
H = Hinata
E = Errors
g = grammar
D = Does It Matter
p = pairings matrix (different variables apply)
Q = Quality
P = Accuracy of Personalities
µ = Coefficient of friction (on the reader)
a = awesomeness
t = time

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I'm waiting. Got the answer yet?

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Okay, great! Now check it with the answer below.

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50% win, 12% EPIC win, 37% PAIRINGS WIN, 1% a bunch of other WINs.

The Omega factor comes out to be INSTANT FAVE.
Lazclura
2009-01-16 . chapter 1
That was SO cute! You captured the whole Nartuo Spirit in there! I loved the fluff, the narration rythm... everything!!
I hope you can enlighten me and tell me where I can find more NaruHina worth to be read, please!
lovingo0Kawaii0oGirl
2009-01-15 . chapter 1
i loved it tnx for writing it!
kisses
mary-am
meow-ee
2009-01-04 . chapter 1
this story is angst and romance right? umm aren't angst stories supposed to have at least one of the main characters to die? and i was really expecting the 'angst part' of your story... -sighs sadly- ...at least the story is nice! so kawaii! my heart melted while i was reading this.nice story. -smiles-
me
2008-12-29 . chapter 1
excellent
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