Aw! So cute and adorable. *.*

This is now
one of my favorite
NaruHina oneshots.
Loved it!

W-what?
H-hey! you cheated!
you used the three magic words that always get's me tearing during those kinds of angsty moments...
'don't leave me,'
damn that's not fair :P

well that was nice. wonderfully written and touching on all the right places. definitely worthy of hitting 100 revs.

nice

Really, really, really good. Made me cry and many thing can make me cry. At least it ended well. Thumbs up!

That was great! I cried when hinata found out though, xD

I'm not even a NaruHina fan anymore, but that was really great. Very emotional and well written. And with a happy ending! Nicely done. ^^

that was beautiful, I almost cried when naruto was begging her. just wonderful!

A mixture of coomedy,drama,romance,angst,tradgey all beautifully mixed into one Chapter-rather one shot- of Naruto and Hinatas complicated relationship. Wonderful job with this. Its wasn't short and no detail like other one-shots. This is like my third time reading this story I love it so much.

Wow... that was absolutely stunning! I mean, the detail and the emotions that you brought out from the couple... it was intense. I wish to one day write as eloquently as you. Yup, that's my goal now.

But from the looks of it, I think I have a long way to go! Better start now I suppose.

Great one-shot!

Ω = (cS[(Twitch + Spaz)× H'(e) + 2NH] — [Eg(D!)] / p{NT + SS + IH} × Q%) + Pµ(Δa / t)

The formula reads as, "Omega equals cS times Twitch-plus-Spaz, times the derivative of H with respect to e, plus two NH, all minus Eg times D factorial, all over the matrix p times Q percent, all plus P times myu times delta a over t."

Using this formula, find the Ω factor where:
c = # of chapters
S = Skill of the writer
e = ending
N = Naruto
H = Hinata
E = Errors
g = grammar
D = Does It Matter
p = pairings matrix (different variables apply)
Q = Quality
P = Accuracy of Personalities
µ = Coefficient of friction (on the reader)
a = awesomeness
t = time

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I'm waiting. Got the answer yet?

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Okay, great! Now check it with the answer below.

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50% win, 12% EPIC win, 37% PAIRINGS WIN, 1% a bunch of other WINs.

The Omega factor comes out to be INSTANT FAVE.

That was SO cute! You captured the whole Nartuo Spirit in there! I loved the fluff, the narration rythm... everything!!
I hope you can enlighten me and tell me where I can find more NaruHina worth to be read, please!

i loved it tnx for writing it!
kisses
mary-am

this story is angst and romance right? umm aren't angst stories supposed to have at least one of the main characters to die? and i was really expecting the 'angst part' of your story... -sighs sadly- ...at least the story is nice! so kawaii! my heart melted while i was reading this.nice story. -smiles-

excellent