Awesome! Wow! I loved from the beginning to end! Too bad I did not see it before but, are you gong to continue with Eric going to California? Please do!

Good story! It almost felt like a real episode.

Lovely!

John, this was so worth the wait! I really loved your story. Fnally some good Eric & Donna love and a little drama to mix it up. I really, really, really liked it.

That was really good. I couldn't believe it when Donna ripped her shirt, I was, like, whoa! She was pissed, man. Haha. Great job on the emotion in this one. Totally palpable. It's completely plausible, too, that Hyde would be, I guess, jealous of everything Eric had. He did really have everything Hyde didn't there for a while, huh? Poor Hyde. I felt his pain when he tried to tell Donna that he liked her. Ouch. I think my favorite part, though, was when Hyde apologized and then looked at Jackie, and she smiled and nodded. Hehe. I don't know why. I just really thought that was a sweet image. Anyway, really... wonderful job. ;)

XOXO - luvcali

John, this was amazing! Definitely worth the wait. There were so many great moments in here, both serious and humourous (one of my favourites being when Donna told Eric he wouldn't last a day in Africa), and it was a really original storyline, if not so much in the general idea as the situation and resulting confrontations.

Really great job.

*squeal* I love it! Poor, confused Hyde! He was an ass, but you made me hate him and feel bad for him at the same time, which takes some talent. Usually when he's an ass, I just hate him. This was so fantastic because there was just enough humor to balence out the angst. Ha, I love how everyone knew that Eric hid money in the Styx 8 track. Red had some good lines too:

“Damn teenagers and their hormones!”

“Well, well, the prodigal dumbass returns.”

Haha, classic. And it was great how everyone was surprised at Jackie's intelligence.

“Oh my god, Jackie, that was so smart and insightful.”

“Yeah, I'm having a really good day!”

This was a wonderful story. You wrote every single character so perfectly. I love it. Great job!

Really great story!

I loved how you had all of them interact and the parts with Red and Kitty were funny and sweet. I love stuff with Red and Eric.

Eric and Donna were sweet but dramatic as were Jackie and Hyde. It shows how their hook up wasnt so far fetched.

Nice insights.

Hey John. I love your story!

Hey, glad you were able to get the story up. Sorry I didn't get back to you right away- life's been hectic. Anyway, it looks pretty good. I probably would have put in some divider lines for scene breaks, but you know I'll take E/D in any way shape or form! ;) Can't wait to see more from you!

Great Story. Let me be one of your first reviews. I liked all the D/E and J/H scenes. Wow! Alot of reading in one sitting but your story kept me going. Great job, I hope you decided to write more or finish the one you started!