Nice one-shot! I really enjoyed reading it!

there will never be an end to how much i love this story

lol awesome

Wow that was really intense, but in the best way. Great job balancing the roughess and tenderness!

Didn't know Kim was fireproof in there. Good erotica.

OMFG that was mind blowing great work!

Oh, very very fun! A great depiction of a first time bondage experience, especially where both partners are unsure if it is going to work. I really liked all the pauses, the checking if the were okay with things.

And now for a cold shower!

Meri

nice apsect of her plasma giving kim an orgasm

Interesting story. I liked the mini-background and Kim's doubts with Shego's ability to counter them through her actions. Nicely done.

Absolutely lovely!

I loved when Kim was tied up and being flogged.

Her being beaten on her pussy was what did it for me.

Thank you very much for divoting some of your time to write this story.

C:

kinky. nice

Wow...just...wow. I liked it, it was hot in a weird, never-want-to-try-anything-like-it kind of way :D

: Big Grin: It was not at all too intense! I look forward to reading your other stories. Thanks for the appetizer! Great thing about short fics is that you can read them often!

it was a good story but only one problem, why make ron gay? he's my faorite guy! i dont care if she brakes up with him but atleast make him straght!