i love this story. love love love love!

Despite him being a complete and total jerk, I feel pity for Monroe.

I remember discovering this story (and the others) through your website a long, long, time ago. Seeing this story updated is kind of like a window into fanfiction past for me :-P

That said, Im thrilled to see that is still being worked on! By and by, its a great story.

Love it. Need more.

Please write 30 more chapters while I go get popcorn.

Hmm... I'd swear i've seen this story somewhere... :)

Your story is simply legendary, I can count, on just my fingers, on only one hand, the number of fanfics that have OCs on par and just as good and memorable as the actual characters themselves, and the interactions between everyone is simply amazing, your portrayal of X has to be my favorite ever too. This is an awesome story, I really can't say much more then that. I really pray that you can one day finish this story, happy writing. (:

No, Iris, no! Who was daddy's Pretty Little Rainbow? Chill, dearie, HEAL!

OKAY. What I say means nothing, but I'm gonna say it. I say DROP the reploids and megaman from the story and forge your own world, then PUBLISH IT. Robotic dragon people? Hidden nazi human ant colonies? Secret bloodlines and simmering outcasts who have to wear bracelet birth control? SNAPPY DIALOGUE?! Come ON. It's GOLD.

*SNIF!* Wikipedia says that thing I'm smelling is REDWALL!

"If you plant the demon seed.." Omigosh. Wow. That's great, right there.

Y'know, there's so many OCs and non canon that it's ridiculous, this mythos, but I think I might enjoy this. Your writing style is descriptive and thought out- I like it. :) Thanks, and happy writing!

Brilliant as always, though I must admit I was starting to lose hope for an update.

Hi.Great story.You are one of the best Megaman Fiction writers on this site.Really hope you decide to finish this,because it deserves to be finished.

Please Update...(within everyone's lifetime too,ok?)

You know, this has been one hell of a story that I just spent the day reading. First it started off funny, which Zero jumping hell on Josh. About a quarter way through, it reminded me of gundam. About halfway through you stepped squarely into the realm of Final Fantasy with the plot twists, and that's neat. This is one damn good story, and I'm ashamed I'm out of room to put it on my favorites list. Definitely going to have to make room, and I'll make sure to keep my eye on this story. Keep up the excellent work!

Nice job on Zero's confrontation with his past!

How will X deal with this? Will he confont Zero and demand an explanation? Will he fight Zero? Or will he stay away from his friend?

Me want to know ^_^

Good writing! I wish I could write more like you :)