Came across this story while on the site... I think its very good. Ever thought of writing a sequel? It should be well received. Think about it :)

oh this is a great story. I love the pace and emotional detail. I really hope that we see more of this.

I just came across your supergirl/kallan storys and i am so loveing them i hope you do more:) I really like the characters and how you describe the feelings;)

this is really good..please add more to this!