Really well written. Interesting to think of what would happen before the whole story line. It's one of my favorite video games (which I have yet to improve at). Nice approach to the whole story line. Really liked it!

Charlotte ;)

In my usual stumblings about the old stories I came up with this. I had actually seen it before, and I've always wanted to congratulate you. Excellent story!

That was awesome! ^_^ Extremely well written, good job!

Wow, this story is aweomse! Love it very much, I do!^^;;;

~Daze~

hey,this is reaverbot from MMO! great story, draco!

Oh wow! That's so cool, Red! I always wondered how maybe Link got to the Kokiri. I mean I know it was mentioned in the game but you give a better description as to what occured prior to him being taken there. ^_^

I really like this story! It's the perfect idea for the beginning of "Ocarina of Time" Very well written!

Very Good!!! A very realistic story of how Link came to the forest!!!

Oh I've seen this one before! I liked then too. :)