jejeje, creo que te falta un poco de estilo con el español!

XD (no te enojes ^^")

Yo tampoco tengo estilo en ingles, pero bueno, q va ser, asi es la vida!

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hehehe, I think you need a bit of style in Spanish!

XD (do not be angry ^ ^ ")

I have no style in English, but hey, that he will be, so is life!

=)

Please update! I don't usually like the "dark/bad" turtle stories, but I've been completely drawn in my yours. I must know what happens!! Wonderful characterization with the others. Leo is OOC, of course, but it's done well. Don't stop with this, please!

Wow, this story has been amazing. Very well written. I've seen Leo go a little dark before, but this is good. I wonder when Raph and Splinter will truly find out. I hope you'll update this. Please. :)

very good other than the fact that Leo weilds Katanas

The way you make such a horrifyingly out of character act something so believable and smooth is quite a feat. I'm seriously looking forward to the retribution. And Mike... poor Mikey. He finds, within a second, that his brother has become a monster.

What made this chapter for me was the irony. From Raph's good-natured amusement at the hypocrisy of night runs to Leo's newfound thoughts of vigilance that he had so strongly battled against in his own brother not too long ago.

It's horrible to think, but this only proves how alike he is to Raphael. Only, bottle up for so long, this fire erupted with a hurricane's force.

The way Leo measures killing seventeen people and oversleeping with the same significance is haunting, and that eerie smile sends chills down my spine. It so strongly signifies how completely the wound cord can break. Excellent play of emotions.

Much Love,
Ash

P.S. I told you I would get around to reading this, and I will review it for you too. The age of chivalry is not dead! ;]

So...oh...my...god, FINISH THIS! I got through Dark of the Night, and...and...uh...the other stuff I read and now can't remember, but god, it was a lot and it was finished and then I said, "Hey Cork. Didn't I read this on Stealthy and it was't finished? But that's okay, cause here it is on fan fic, so therefore, it shall be finished."

And so hurt that it's not finished!

In case I hadn't shown it, I'm really in to this story now and I'm just sick with anticipation that you haven't completed it. Hurts so.

FINISH!

ok its like 1 AM and I have to work tomarrow...I want to read the next two chapters but if I do I'll be dying...then again I'm dying to know what happens next! lol. I love it. I love the gritty dark horse feel the story has to it while still retaining a smidge of the movie. I love Leo stories to begin with, and I'll admit at the beginning I was was kinda eh? He's killing? I grew up with the original comics and those were VERY much blood and death, so this, to me is very much in line with canon directions.

I like the agents. After all, they are just doing their jobs. I hope the story keeps going!

Wow... This is so good, no wonder it won so many awards and things! Seriously looking forward to the next chapter... When is Leo gonna go back to the 'Light' side? He's making be nervous... lol

Very interesting and terrifying story of a dark future for Leo, and I'm really enjoying how it makes me sit on the edge of my chair as I'm reading-- wondering when/if the police will catch Ren/Leo, how his family is going to respond, etc. The kid Cash is probably going to play an important part in Leo's discovery, or at least in Raph discovering that his *brother* is the Vigilante. (Leo will probably end up killing Cash's Dad, or one of his criminal connections. Or they'll know the guy that Leo didn't end up killing.) I'm also curious if the police will eventually make a connection between the Nightwatcher and the Vigilante; Cash has seen Raphael after all-- can't be too hard to notice that someone has three fingers. So probably the kid will think his newfound father-person is a murderer and either confront Raph or call the police . . .

Also, April is in SO MUCH trouble for supplying the turtles with throwing stars right now, buying weapons for someone else. Especially since they've been used in murders. Things are not looking good for her. I know people are sent to jail for selling weapons to people who don't have licenses, and I can't see the fact that she was getting throwing stars for teenage mutant ninja turtles will make things any better for her! Although I must say that it stretched my imagination when the detectives clued in on April at the weapons shop, when there were other places to investigate and at least one other man on that list.

So yeah, I think a confrontation between the police and Nightwatcher would be a fairly fascinating addition to the story, but I realize you've probably got it all planned out, how this will end.


:-) I look forward to the next chapter!

Not only have you managed to turn Leo into a deranged serial killer, but you've made it actually make sense! Even as he is changing, he is still - in an incredibly twisted sort of way - in character. It's ingenius!

I like how you start out each chapter with a snippet from his time in Central America. It really emphasises just how many experiences he's had that he does not share with his brothers and how, at least in his mind, that distances him from them. I am interested to see how that subplot carries out. I was just as shocked as Leo when the woman who had nursed him back to health stole his ninjaken.

The FBI agents were introduced quite nicely. I like how we get a sense of their personalities but how, at the same time, you keep the focus on Leo. Adding them to the fic really upped that sense of danger.

This fic is oozing with suspense! Every time Leo goes out, I am worried for him. When he got knocked out at Javier's place, I didn't realise at first that Javier had died and was worried what he was going to do to Leo once Leo was out cold in his living room. Especially after that point in the fic, I worry about what will happen. And then you leave us hanging with the feds at April's place AND their getting more details on Leo's physical appearance... holy crap!

There is just so much to this fic! I hope you're fixing to update soon!!

Really like your story hope you have not abandon it.

This has got to be THE BEST Leo story I have ever read! True, I read way too many of them and I am a huge fan of pretty much everything Leonardo, but this is definate top 5 material!

As well, you are an amazing author. I can just understand, believe and agree why you are nominated for Best Author.

This and Suicide are my favourite fanfics of all time. I keep waiting in hopes that you'll update this story soon, for I am hungry to find out what happens next.

Absolutely spectactular job, my friend! ^_^

Awesome chapter, Pi. Sorry I didn't review this during the summer. I was going to, but at the time that I read this, I found out that one of my favorite wrestlers committed a murder-suicide. So, because of that, I really didn't want to read about Leo killing people. However, I'm over that now and ready to return to the story. Great job. I'll read more now. You are an awesome writer.

The Bubbly One,
Shell

This story has left my captivated! I hope you continue it; I'd very much like to see what becomes of Leonardo. Thanks for sharing!

Sorry it took so long to review but life's been hectic.
I loved this chapter! Leo getting so close to getting caught but saving the FBI guy was my favorite part by far. This is awesome! You go into so much detail that it feels like your there with them. The fact that you remember all the names and details from previous chapters is a feat that I could never accomplish without having a list or something. Looking forward to your next installment!