| Reviews for An Illusion of Consciousness |
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thedreadedlurgy 10/20/09 . chapter 5keep going. even if this doesn't have a lot of reviews, the story is still good. |
thedreadedlurgy 10/20/09 . chapter 2XD moremoremore |
thedreadedlurgy 10/20/09 . chapter 1this is good. i can't believe there aren't more reviews. maybe if u changed the summary...? |
rockdogravi 12/27/07 . chapter 5Ooh. I'm genuinly interested in this. Ya know, it vaguely reminds me of this movie I saw once about a cheerleader who was sent to gay/lesbian camp.. anyhow, Sasuke and Naruto will end up together, right? Cheers; Eeyore |
ravensbff 6/4/07 . chapter 5Holy shit, that was depressing. Like, heart-rendingly, dripping blood, character-death depressing. And yet not overdone. Now that takes skill, right there! Keep making us sad! Raven |
Roxtrox7 6/3/07 . chapter 1That was amazingly depressing but in a good way. You're a great author. I love your imagery. I'll keep reading. Love Roxtrox |
Inuyashanaruto 4/19/07 . chapter 4Cool I liked it I look forward to the next. |
ravensbff 4/16/07 . chapter 4Wah! Naruto-kun just needs a hug! And so does Sasuke-kun! Are all the people there becuase they tried to kill themselves? Or do some of them have different problems? Are you going to introduce anyone else into "the nuthouse?" |
ravensbff 4/16/07 . chapter 1So you decided to rework it, huh? How come? It seems a lot more melancholy now, if that was your intention. |
ayeala150 4/16/07 . chapter 4this is a rather interesting improvement! The additions and editing make it come alive more so and develop the characters a lot better! I'm enjoying it so far! Naruto and Sasuke seem so much more believable and im am TRYING, trying being the key word here, to put together the rest of Sasuke's problem...he's a masochist, he's withdrawn, moody and silent, but i'm not sure why he's there yet...working on it...now to wait for an update..._ |