This is an amazing story and I am completely drawn into the characters. I love where this new storyline is going. I really hope you could wrap it up. I am eagerly awaiting.

Great stuff! Where are you, though?

I can't wait for more! There will be more, right!

Let me start by saying this is an incredible story. It has a wonderful balance of intrigue, drama, action, and philosophy. I can't wait to read more. I can't think of anything more constructive to add.

Awesome story! I love how Anakin and Obi-Wan, but especially Anakin, are becoming forces behind the Jedi Order training. I quite enjoy reading about the progress Anakin has made. However, I can not help but hope that you will update this story soon, especially considering the fact that you left off at a huge cliffhanger. Luke and Leia look like they are in the hands of Palpatine and the rest of Anakin's family is in the hands of Nute Gunray! Jedi to the rescue!

I hope you get time to update this story. I really would like to know what happens to Padme and her whole family along with what happens to the twins.

It was a decent story up till your last chapter, but then you went off the rails. Nute Gunray is an incompetent fool. There is absolutely no way in hell that he managed to get into the JEDI TEMPLE guesthouses. That's just mindblowingly retarded. As is the idea that Gunray would ever come to do something like that himself rather than send minions.

I also found the way the kids were kidnapped to be ludicrous. You've heavily implied throughout the story that the Jedi Temple Guesthouses are if not withing the Temple proper, at least under the protection. Yet two mediocre Darksiders managed to get there with nobody sensing them? These two aren't Darth Sidious, able to cloak his presence from the Jedi They're third rate chump villains.

Horrible, hamhanded way to advance the plot, when there where a thousand other ways to accomplish the exact same thing much more realistically.

It has been a joy to read this tale. I love the idea of an older Jedi code that has changed to become the current Jedi Code. I love the New Version of the Jedi Code most. I will say that the current code was practiced 4 thousand years BBY, but no matter.

Please continue this story soon!

So far this story has been a good one. I look forward to reading the conclusion in the coming chapters if what you said is true, and that you feel that you see the end in sight.

I love this story. I hope that Anakin finds the Naberries and the twins, kills Sidious without turning dark, etc.

This is an amazing story! I really love your ideas of what could have been if only Anakin and Obi-Wan had been willing to really communicate with each other. I know there are people who get in trouble, or even turn evil, despite having great parents, but I honestly think this is a lot more believable than how things turned out in the movies. I've also been enjoying the discussions about the Code, and especially the differences between the Living Force and the Unified Force. It's cool that Obi-Wan is finally starting to follow the Living Force better - I hope that trend continues.

I can't wait to see how all this plays out. Please, please update soon! I'm glad Seranth finally got rescued, but now Luke and Leia have gone missing! Hopefully they won't be too traumatized by the experience.

Thank you so much for a great story, and I'm looking forward to reading the next installment.

Like the story so far. However, I would like to point out that, "Saleucami has fallen, and Master Vos has moved his troops to Boz Pity" was a good thing for the Republic. Just a small thing though.

You can't quit now. I swear to Iesha if I don't get a new chapter within the week I will bug you shamelessly until you finish this story just to shut me up.

Seriously it's too good, well done.

Good read. I have to ask reading the part about Ahsoka...what exactly happened to her? Did she die, or is she alive, what?

Good story. Some very nice twists and turns.