loely story. poor Zoey, that jerk-Mark didn't deserve her. i only hope now that Elliott will stay with her. she looks so alone and he looks like the only one who can make her happy, even if he is driving her crazy some times (that's Elliott)!
please PDATE really soon. i really want to read the rest of the story and see how it's going to be with those two.
ZOEYxELLIOTT (ICHIGOxRYOU) forever and ever.
can't wait for some romantic hot moents of those two!
;-)
UPDATE soon please!
;-)

me too.. he deserves her and she deserves him... god, that sounded so weird...
keep updating :)

Ok.. and image of Zoey round about the same hight as Elliot is in my head

Hey. i think u should update soon. i really want 2 read the 7th chapter. i dont remeber if i added this 2 my favs, but i will if i didnt already. update a.s.a.u.p.c. cant wait 2 read the next chapter.

Write Soon, Sar T. Loves Ryou Shirogane.

that was good,
but elliot seemed pretty out of character to me.
also, it seemed slightly rushed.
but i liked it :)

That is so cute! I loved the ending of that chapter, I can't wait for some more ElliotZoey fluff! Keep up the awesome work!

that was cute, but sad, i guess. really cute. i liked it, no i didnt like it, i loved it. update a.s.a.u.p.c. cant wait 2 read what happens next.

Write Soon, Sar T.

Really good please write more.

good job

i loved ur fanfic hope u make more chapters on this fanfic please!1

Kinda stressful. But very good. ... It made me tired. o_0 RANDOMNESS!

Really good so far! But, Elliot/Ryou isn't really always that calm towards her. He would probably be like, "It's probably cause you're fat" or "Get back to work Zoey". But really good otherwise!

hello! i like it but it's too short! please continue as soon as you can! Ryou and Ichigo 4ever!

cool chappie, keep it up!

Short chapter... I- I don't mean that in a mean way. I mean, small chapters build suspense and suspense is good cuz then people want to read more which is also good and now I'm starting to sound like Lettuce!