A great story. Very well written.

Interesting little insight!

awww, i dont know why i just said that but i loved your story! it is almost the same with every story but this one had a spark to it-it feels as though i am somewhere in that house and in jasper's head and as though im really there. you have a gift that i wish i could have. huh, i guess i just have a fast reading skill. btw-i read at a 12th grade level, but that was in fifth grade and now im in eighth; anwyays, i was wondering if you know of any good bucks that arent TOO mature-i have no problem reading things like that(please dont make that sound like im some crazy maniac) but my parents dont want me reading that um, perticular content yet...

That was some rare sibling bonding between Jasper and Bella.

This is cool, we get a glimpse of what is going on in Jazz's head. please try and write more fics!

Nice fic. You capture Jasper very well, not surprising given your penname, but still.

I liked your veiw of how vampires feel about blood. You dont see that in many fics.

i like it!

I like that last line! So true!

i love jasper/bella centric fics! especialy one about them ebing friends! Loved it!

Ah Jasper..I love stories on him...Bella too !

I really love this exchange between Jasper and Bella. I love how honestly he tells her about the process of hunting. It's nice to see Bella get an apology for the birthday incident too.

aw Ailsa, this is brilliant, i really loved it. you have such a great understanding of jasper's thoughts, i felt like i wa son the hunt wiht him. i love the dynamic between bella and jasper. you do an exceptional job depicting their relationship. is this a oneshot?

Ah, I loved that so much! You described it so well! Oh! And your signature on the lex, the link to the stories doesn't work! You have the link for the preview, it only works for you. Just thought you should know. I loved it!

I have often imagined a conversation like this between Jasper and Bella. And exchange to heal the distance created from her birthday. Lovely scene. I shall expect great things from you.

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